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The Storm Overhead

24 November 2008 15 Comments

    First of all, this is part of the Fall of Pein, Rise of the Whirlpool Series. If you want to catch up, read this first: Fall Of Pein, Rise Of The Whirlpool.

This is not my work. I want to get this clear straight away. I tried my best, and I hope you guys appreciate it, but that’s all I can promise. Anyway, let’s start!

3 weeks have passed since Naruto was promoted to chunin, the squad originally sent by Kakashi never reported back, 2 more ANBU squads met the same fate. The village is at breaking point. Naruto, now accepting his rank, has done nothing but train his body. Sakura spends long amounts of time trying to stop him pushing himself so far, and on one day, she gets her wish….

23998, 23999, 24000! – Naruto

Naruto, you sound like Lee. Why are you doing this? your a chunin now. You have responsibilities, why does being Jounin mean so much?! – Sakura

I….must….save…my….friends – Naruto says as he puts his shirt back on.

Naruto. I know the ANBU squads dissapearing has bothered you, and so does Kakashi-sama, and that is why he has asked to meet you. Naruto, you have a mission. – Sakura

WHAT?!! A mission? I don’t have time, I have to get stronger then the ANBU if I want to save Sasuke, and the village.

Just, please Naruto. Forget Sasuke, I know it’s hard, I really, really do. But we have to. Noone can bring him back. – Sakura

 There is an awkard silence as Naruto releases the weight packs from his arms, legs and even his neck. He picks up his Kunai pouch and with only a small wave leaps out of his window. Now, running quicker then he has ever managed, he sprints towards Kakashi’s office.

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Naruto leaps straight through Kakashi’s window and looks up to see a crowd of people he hasn’t seen in a long time. It’s then he realises that his friends have also changed in the last few weeks, they all seem stronger, though he is not sure how, there is a feeling of mutual strength and everyone sits in a strange silence, awaiting the new Hokage’s word….

Naruto, Shikamaru, Neji, Kiba, Shino and Hinata. Thankyou for turning up. You 6 are the current strongest ninja in the village – Kakashi

But?! – Naruto

Naruto. Rank does not mean anything at the moment. Shutup. Or ill bounce you back to the academy. – Kakashi slyly winks

It’s good to know someone never changes…. – Murmered Naruto.

Anyway. You all know of the squads of ANBU dissapearing lately. Well we have recieved word. Sasuke and Akatsuki have taken the 8 tails beast. And now need only one. We still do not have a real idea of their intentions. Only that without Pein, and thanks to you, Naruto. They are having trouble. And that is why, we are going on the counter attack. Sasuke, his team and Akatsuki are sitting recovering from their last fight, and planning their next move. We want you, to meet with them. Alone. And stop their plans. You will be the main attack force. You know Sasuke better then anyone else. You must stop him. We have backup for you. They will show up roughly 20 minutes after engagement to clear up. I have never made a decision so hard, but you all have been picked especially for this fight. We have used our rough knowledge of his forces to formulate a plan. 1 on 1 fighting. And don’t worry, I will be coming along as well. There is something I have to do. I will not be with you, but when it begins. You will see me.

Kakashi-sensei…are you sure? I mean, I think i’ve grown in the last few weeks, I know i’m stong, but Akatsuki are something else. Do you really think we can do it? – Naruto

This is the biggest risk this village has taken, but no matter what, you will come back alive. I guarantee. Now. GET OUT! Get ready! And meet me at the gate in 1 hour. I have a few surprises. – Kakashi

YES SENSEI! – The newly formed team Gaiku said in unison as they launched out of Kakashi’s room.

Naruto knew this was it. Now or never was his chance to bring back Sasuke. He would do it. He must do it. And now, more then ever, he was smiling at the thought.

15 Comments »

  • killerbee08 said:

    nice one were did you get it??

  • white shinobi said:

    GJ sothe i think DL would’ve agreed with you on most points

  • Sothe (author) said:

    Killerbee, we had an author like me who died a few weeks back, he wrote a HUGE series of fan fic he never finished, I got the permission, and im carrying on from there,

    Anyway, I know it isnt great, but just story telling is not what Im good at, and I plan to have help for next time…the battles should bring this back, all comments, or advice are really appreciatd!

  • mart1 said:

    It was good sothe, I’m glad you continued his work. However I think fusion with the kyubii would put Naruto at Sanin level. I’m looking forward to more from this. R.I.P. DL

  • Ultimatehokage said:

    you continue his work very well, sothe.
    Naruto strength is almost on the jonin state and more, but he need to be mature, but he is on a good way to it.

  • WhiteFangofkonaha said:

    gj sothe i think dl is smilign upon u :D

  • DarkShinobi said:

    this is pretty cool…GJ who ever the writer is

  • Naruto Namikaze Uzumaki said:

    Great job dont take long to write the next one though. I want to know more keep us intrested ^_^

  • eighthHokage said:

    Good job Sothe! I congrats you ’cause You was only one enough brave to continue DL’s work… and for that we all have to be thankful.
    It will be hard but I know that (with the little help of others authors) you will finish this series. Good luck. :D

  • eighthHokage said:

    P.S.I agree with WFK -DL is certainly smiling upon you.
    R.I.P DL

  • killerbee08 said:

    sothe make another one like this I like the story it was cool.(n_n)

  • Ultimatehokage said:

    How many fan fics DL left for us?

  • mart1 said:

    Why was this reposted???

  • Ninja Bob said:

    Bob’s official response: SHANNARO!!!

  • fan boy said:

    nice job of honouring your friend sothe

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