InoShikaCho – Final Mission. . . Conclusion.
First I would like to say, Sorry to Avatar_Sean16. I’m not one to step on people’s blog space, but a really big situation came up, and I had to change the date. Why didn’t I choose another date? Well, because people HAVE been waiting for this blog and the next available date was until the 22nd. I’m not going to make people wait any longer than what they already did, so there. In case you don’t accept my sincere apology, then all that needs to be said is. . . .  I’M AN AUTHOR AND THERE’S NOTHING YOU CAN DO ABOUT IT! Nana Nana Na. lol. No but seriously, I apologize Avatar_Sean16 for the intrusion.
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And now the conclusion to this epic mission.
* Just so you know anything within these ( ) are thoughts.
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As the battle continued between the two teams, things started to heat up. Literally.
“Katon: Intense Dragon-breath” – Konohamaru. “How typical” said Kyozoku as he repelled the attack with a three bladed scythe, with two in one side and the other at the other end. “Can’t you Konoha guys do anything else? It’s always fire this and fire that.” (“Man this guy’s going to be a handful”)thought Konohamaru. (“I wonder how the rest are doing?”)
(“Man I hope Shikamaru’s plan works, I can’t hold on much longer.”) – Choji. “Come on Hoggy, is that the best you can do?” – Sanzoku. “You haven’t even dished out any jutsus, what kind of Shinobi doesn’t have jutsus?” taunted Sanzoku, followed by a laugh. (“Shit come on Shikamaru”) – Choji.
Hizoku in the mean time was having his fun with Ino. “Now what is a hot girl like you doing in a place like this, huh? Don’t you know you can get hurt?” he said as he punched her in the gut with extreme force. (“Hope everyone is in place soon, if not the Mind Control Jutsu isn’t going to work.”) – Ino.
“Man and I thought I was weak.” – Hito. “Is this the best Konoha has to offer? Annihilating it suddenly doesn’t sound that hard.” “Konoha is not weak” reclaimed Takigias he got up of the ground, with blood coming down his mouth. “We’ll show you who’s weak!!!” Takigi suddenly sprinted to Hito, doing hand signs while doing so. “Illusion Art: Firewood Entrapment!!!” In a blink of the eyes, Hito found himself tied up with firewood all over his body. “Nani? Where am I? Get me out of here!!” From the shadows a figure is seen, hard to make out. The sound of his voice then gives his identity. “Now who’s the weakling?” – Takigi. “You bastard I’ll skin you alive!!!” – Hito. “How ironic, you speak of my skin, when you will no longer have yours.” “What are you talking about?” Hito then listens to the final words he’s ever going to hear. “Katon: Camp Fire Circle.” Hito’sbody suddenly got really hot, then again who’s wouldn’t when they THINK they’re being burnt alive. Suddenly a wall of flames surround both Takigi and his opponents’ motionless body.
(“That’s the signal, the plan has started”) – Shikamaru. “You should really pay attention to who your fighting.” stated Hidan as he slightly scratched Shikamaru’s face with his scythe. “I’m paying attention to everything.” answered Shikamaru. “Including how your team is getting their asses handed to them? HA HA HA.” laughed Hidan. “I’m not the one who’s losing his teammates.” replied Shikamaru. “He’s of no importance to me.” declared Hidan as he continued his fight for revenge. “YOU however are, you pointy haired fuck!†said Hidan as he liked Shikamaru’s blood from his scythe, and transformed to his black-skeleton mode.
(“Alright, time to get serious.â€) – Shikamaru. “It’s about time, YOU DIIIEEEE!!!.” exclaimed Hidan, as he finished his religious mark, and was about to stab himself. However he couldn’t move. “Not this technique again!? Didn’t you learn from the last time we fought that I’m used to it?” “Yes, I know your used to MY technique. Which is why I’m not doing it.” – Shikamaru. “Nani?! Your not making sense! What do you mean?” Hidan then looked at the floor, and realized that there was no shadow between him and Shikamaru. (“How can I be in THAT technique? If he’s not doing it, then who is?”) Hidanthen looked around the battlefield and didn’t noticed Takigi. (“The kid, can it be the kid? It has to be, who else could it be?”) Suddenly Takigiappears out from behind the flames. (“Nani!?!?!?” “The kid!? Then who the fuck is doing this?!?! And why is it stronger than the pony-tailed bastard!?!?!”)
“YOU BASTARD!!!! YOU KILLED MY LITTLE BROTHER!!!!” screamed Hizoku as he rushed towards the man he thinks killed his brother. “I’LL KILL YOOOUUUUU!!!!!!” Hizoku’s screams continued. As he was getting ready to attack Takigi’s body, he was surprised by a punch to the face by Choji. “Where do you think your going fatty? I’m your playmate.” said Sanzoku, as he headed towards Choji at full force. He then stopped in mid attack and changed directions towards Ino. (“Nani? Did he noticed what she was up to?”) thought Choji as he looked at Hizoku, as he was getting up. (“Will she do it in time? Come on Ino, you can’t mess this up.”), that’s what was going trough both Choji’s and Takigi’s head.
Ino’s body was then fiercely attacked by Sanzoku. It was a killing blow. “NOOOOO!!!! IIIIINNNOOOO!!!!” screamed in fear Choji at the sight of Ino’s motionless body. “Did she do it in time?!” thought out loud Takigi. “I didn’t give her time to do anything.” confidently concluded Sanzoku. (“That’s what you think”) thought Choji, as he saw Hizoku’s body stop it’s attack on Takigi’s body. “NOW IT’S DEATH FOR ALL OF YO-.” Sanzoku couldn’t finish his sentence. How could he? He was being stabbed in the back, by none other that Hizoku, literally. “Nani? Hizoku? What’s gotten into you? Why are y-you attacking m-m-me . . . ?”
With that Sanzoku collapsed to the floor, defeated. As soon as Sanzoku’s death was confirmed, Hizoku made a cut on a finger and made sure to cover his kunai with his blood. “Shikamaru!! Here take this!!”, those were to be the last words ever spoken from Hizoku’s mouth. He threw the kunai towards Shikamaru, which Shikamaru anticipated, and caught. He then deliberately gave it to Hidan.
Hidan, under the effects of the Kagemane, then licked the kunai and stabbed himself in the heart. Killing Hizoku instantly. “You bastard!! How there you use me as a fucking guinea pig!!! You little shit!! I‘ll have my revenge, you sorry sack of shit!!!†“Yeah, you and what army?†– Takigi. “The same can be said to you.†said confidently Kyozoku, as he was holding Konohamaru’s motionless body.
“Ninja Art: Scythe Dispersion!!!†with that shout Kyozoku’s scythe blades dispersed, each bladed headed towards one of team Shika members. One headed toward Ino at an alarming rate. Choji wanted to run and protect her, but was caught by the blade that was intended for him. The last blade hit Takigi in a vital part of his body, killing him, if he was real.
“LOOKS LIKE YOUR ALL ALONE YOU BASTARD!!!! MUAHAHAHAHAH!!!!†– Hidan. “Looks could be deceiving.†said a voice that sounded like Shikamaru, however the Shikamaru in front of Hidan didn’t open his mouth. “What‘s the meaning of this?!?!†alarmed Kyozoku. “Your ours now.†mentioned the Konohamaru’s severed body. “Shut Up!! Dead people can‘t talk!†exclaimed Kyozoku in confusion, as he threw the body to the floor.
Suddenly the three ‘dead’ bodies of Ino, Choji and Takigi, dispersed. “NANI?!?! KageBushins?!?!†– both Hidan and Kyozoku. “HAHAHAHA! Looks like we‘re the ones laughing now!†said the voice of Konohamaru as the body in the floor started to vanished. “We got the information we needed.†said Shikamaru as he started to walk away. And the Kagemane Hidan was under was gone.
Hidan and Kyozoku then played attention to Shikamaru. “Hidan!!†– Kyozoku “I know you don‘t have to tell me!! I’VE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS MOMENT FOR A LONG TIME!!!†Hidan them ran towards Shikamaru and swung his scythe directly to his head. “YOUR MINE YOU LITTLE FUCK!! DIE YOU PONNY-TAILED BAST–†Smoke covered Shikamaru’s body upon contact. As the smoke cleared, a horrific image was revealed. The beheaded man on the floor was not Shikamaru. “Hito!? You killed Hito? I thought he was already dead?!?! HITO WAS ALREADY DEEEEAAAAD!!!!†– Kyozoku.
“Genjutsu?! That damn brat‘s body was a Genjutsu all this time. I WAS FIGHTING AN ILLUSION THIS WHOLE FUCKING TIME?!?!?†– Kyozoku. “Looks like I wasn‘t the only guinea pig.†– Hidan. “SHUT IT HIDAN, DON‘T FORGET THAT I‘M THE REASON WHY YOU CAN‘T DIE!!!†(“THOSE KONOHA BASTARDS MADE US THINK WE WERE FIGHTING THEM TO GET WHO KNOWS WHAT INFORMATION!!! WE WERE PLAYED LIKE RATS†WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON?!?!?!)
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End of this part of the conclusion. I know, I know I said that I was going to finish this on THIS blog. AND that I will do. So take a breather, drink a beer, stretch your legs, read some porn and come back when your ready. If you wish to comment on this part, feel free to do so. You can then comment on the second part of this blog. Or comment together when your done reading.
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Are you ready now to read on? Good, first let me explain some things for those of you who are like, What the hell just happened? Well it’s better if you find out for yourself.
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Team Shika – right after Konohamaru does the Kage bushin, and before they start the attack on Hidan and the rest.
“Alright, this is the plan.†– Shikamaru. “You have one already?†– Konohamaru. “Of coarse he those.†– Choji. “Listen up you two.†– Ino. “Sorry.â€- both Choji and Konohamaru.
“Konohamaru, you will make three Kage Bushins. One looking like you, and the other two like Ino and Choji.†“Got it.â€-Konohamaru. “The Bushins, along with Takigi and Myself will intercept the enemy, While Ino, Choji, and Konohamaru position yourselves in this manner.†continued Shikamaru, as he drew a on the floor of everyone’s positions. “In case there are more than five assailants, one of the bushins will ‘die‘…†“Telling me how many more there is, brilliant.†interrupted Konohamaru. “Will you let him finish!â€-Ino. “Sorry, again.â€
“Once Team1 find out there numbers, WE will separate them and take them one on one. Hidan without a doubt will fight me. This will be problematic, since he‘s used to my technique. SO Takigi you will need to ‘take care‘ of your opponent quickly, but don‘t kill him.†“Me, you really think I can do it?â€-Takigi. “Of course, or else why would I even consider it.†That brought a smile on Takigi. “Oh, and before I forget. Takigi once your opponent is ‘eliminated‘, make sure you cover both you and your opponents from EVERYONES sight. I don‘t care how you do it, just make it obvious to us.†“I‘ll use Fire.â€-Takigi. “What better signal…†interrupted Konohamaru, again. “WHAT DID I SAY!!!â€-Ino. “Last time I swear.â€
“Once ‘covered‘, Konohamaru will do another Kage Bushin to take your place, as you escape with your opponents body, positioning your self here. You then use Kagamane on Hidan. He won‘t be immune to you. You have to do this as quickly as possible.†“However, make sure you do it after he gets some of my blood and transforms himself.†“But, Shikamaru isn‘t that to dangerous?! After all that‘s how Asuma-sensei died!†stormed in Ino. “Ino!! Stop!!â€-Choji†“Now who‘s interrupting?!†alleged Konohamaru. “I know how you feel, but you have to trust me.â€-Shikamaru.
“Now where was I, oh yeah. Once Hidan is subdued, Ino will take control of one of the opponents, and eliminate the rest of the opponents while they are confused. The fake Ino will give the signal when ‘she‘s‘ in position. Once all but Hidan are eliminated, the possessed opponent will cut himself and hand me the bloody weapon. I will them give this to Hidan. Takigi will make Hidan stab himself in the heart, killing the opponent. However, due to the technique Ino will be using, she will die as well if she is still in control. So make sure Ino is out before you do. Which is why your positioned at each others’ view, so you can communicate with each other.â€
“Once that is done, we concentrate on Hidan. Any questions?†“I got one, What if there is someone as strong, or stronger than Hidan?â€-Konohamaru “Then the fake Konohamaru will take care of him, of them. So make you make him stronger than the rest of the Bushins, can you do that?†“No problem.†answered confidently Konohamaru. “Once the plan is executed, we wait for our moment to strike.â€
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Again, IF you need a breather, take one. I know I am.
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Alright let’s keep it going. I’ll start a little bit before Hidan kills Hito. But first I have to clear something out.
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“Crap what am I supposed to do with this guy?†Takigi asked himself, as Konohamaru approached the ring of fire. “KAGEBUSHIN NO JUTSU!“ “What are you waiting for? Let‘s go! Here I‘ll help you with this guy.†“Konohamaru-sama, Shikamaru-sensei didn‘t say what to do with him.†“Yeah, your right. I guess Brainiac didn‘t think of everything. Don‘t worry leave him to me.†“Are you going to kill him?†questioned Takigi. “Nah, not my style to kill defenseless people. But I think I know who wouldn‘t mind.â€
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“Oh no he‘s going straight towards Shikamaru!â€-Ino. Just as Ino was about to sprint into action, a kunai flew right in front of her. It had a note from Takigi. ‘Don’t worry that’s not Shikamaru-sensei. Konohamaru-sama is taking care of it.’ (“What does this mean.â€) As Hidan finished his attack, Ino got her answer, along with another message. ’Told ya. In the cofusion Shikamaru switched places with a ’fake Shikamaru’, which was ‘combination henge’ that consisted of the dead man in the floor and a Kage bushin. I didn’t know Konohamaru-sama was so skilled with his Kage Bushin techniques as well as he is.’ “Neither did I.†concurred Ino to herself. (“The Bushin must have been giving the enemy a piggy back ride for that to work. Jeez, he‘s as unpredictable as the man who taught him. Naruto taught you well.â€) smiled Ino at the end of her thought. She then cleared her head to listen to the argument between the two men in the battlefield.
“Genjutsu?! That damn brat‘s body was a Genjutsu all this time. I WAS FIGHTING AN ILLUSION THIS WHOLE FUCKING TIME?!?!?†– Kyozoku. “Looks like I wasn‘t the only guinea pig.†– Hidan. “SHUT IT HIDAN, DON‘T FORGET THAT I‘M THE REASON WHY YOU CAN‘T DIE!!! IF IT WASN‘T FOR ME YOU WOULND‘T BE IMORTAL!!†“WHY THE HELL DO YOU HAVE TO BRING THAT UP?!!?â€-Hidan. “Because it‘s true. I‘m the one that started Jashin, with my jutsus. I‘m the very first Jashin follower. The fact that we‘re twins, is the reason why you can‘t die. As long as one of us stays alive, the other can‘t die.â€
“NANI?!?!â€-Team Shika. (“So we have to kill both, at the same time!â€) thought Shikamaru. (“Man, this is intense.â€)-Choji. (“Come on when are we going to fight these guys.â€)-Konohamaru.
“This is all your fault!!†accused Kyozoku. “How the fuck is this my fault?!!?†reclaimed Hidan. “If you would of finished of those Konoha brats 9 years ago, this wouldn‘t of happened!†“What?! How was I supposed to know they were going to get all emo over their sensei.†(“Oh no, this isn‘t good.â€) thought Ino as she saw Takigi’s face. It looked like Shikamaru when he’s trying to piece something together. (“Nine year ago. I‘m nine. My father died when I wasn‘t even born yet. The pictures in Shikamaru-sensei‘s house, and Konohamaru-sama-s house. Konohamaru-samawanted to be in this mission, for an unknown reason. What unknown reason. What unknown reason can that be. Why was everyone so hush-hush when they talked about this mission around me. Why so concerned with me. â€) tears started to manifest as he grew closer to the truth. (He called me cousin once, Konohamau-sama did. Mom has a picture of a guy on her dresser. It‘s the same guy, in all three houses. They called him Asuma-sensei. That‘s his name. That’s the name of my Father. IT‘S MY FATHER! I AM CHILD OF THE MAN IN ALL THE PICTURES!!! THAT SON-OF-A-BITCH KILLED MY FATHER!!â€)
With tears in his eyes Takigi stormed to the man he now knows killed his father. “No! Takigi were are you going?†asked foolishly Ino, as she knew exactly where he was going. (“Crap Takigi is on the move. Why? And Why is he cryin- Oh no.â€) realized Konohamaru. (“Shit this is bad.â€)-Konohamaru.
Takigi suddenly stood in front of the two immortal twins, with a look of uncompassionate hatred. Shikamaru then realized, “What is he doing there?†“What‘s going on?†asked himself Choji, as he saw his beloved Ino chasing after Takigi. But it was to late, Takigi was already in the lions den.
“Hidan, look it‘s one of them.â€-Kyozoku “Yeah, the one that started it all with his fire jutsu. What is your name, rugrat?†“My name. My . . . Name. My name is.†“What you don‘t know your name? I would hate to kill someone without a name.†mocked Hidan. “How does his name matter? Just kill him and be done with it.â€-Kyozoku.
“MY NAME IS TAKIGI SARUTOBI, AND YOU KILLED MY FATHER!!!†(“Nani?!He figured it out?!â€) shockingly realized the rest of team Shika.
“Well, you have to be a little specific. I killed a lot of people‘s father‘s.†“Enough talk, and kill him already.â€-Kyozoku. “Fine. Here I come kid hope your read-†his attack was interrupted by both Shikamaru and Konohamaru. “Told you we should of told him.†Konohamaru confronted Shikamaru. “A discussion for another time.â€-Shikamaru.
As Kyozoku was getting ready to assist his brother, he was intercepted by Choji and Ino. “You guys take care of that guy!†announced Choji. “We got this one.†followed Ino.
“Takigi I‘m sorry we didn‘t tell you, but right now you need to calm down, DO YOU UNDERSTAND?â€-Shikamaru. “Why didn‘t you tell me?!â€-Takigi. “There‘s a time and a place. And that time and place, is NOT NOW!!â€-Konohamaru.
“Humph, more bushins.”-Kyozoku. “HUMAN BOULDER!!” screamed Choji as he gave way to the fight. Kyozoku narrowly escapes the attack. However, Inoused the distraction her husband gave her to attack him with a barrage of explosive tagged kunais. ”Guess their finally getting serious.” thought Kyozokuas explosions gathered around him. “Yeah, that should do it!!”-Ino. As the smoke cleared Ino’s excitement vanished. “Oh right, immortal. This is going to be something.”
In the other side of battle, the rest of Team Shika were having their own problems. “Katon: Fire Dragon Blast!!”-Konohamaru. “Kage Nui”-Shikamaru. “Your attacks are pointless agenst me!”-Hidan. “Takigiare you going to just stand their, or help!!”-KM (Konohamaru, for those that can’t make that distinction.). Takigi was still an emotional reck. Hidan used that to his advantage. He charged towards both KM and Shika. Fooling them both, his target was Takigi himself. “OH NO! Kagemane no Jutsu!!” Shika realized Hidan’s intentions and stopped him in his tracks. KM then followed and took his ccousin out of there. KM felt a liquid substance in his palm. It was blood. Hidan managed to stab Takigi, not a deadly wound. “Multi Size Jutsu!” KM heared as Choji continued his fight, along side his wife, against the other brother.
“You can grow as much as you like, that isn’t going to change a damn thing.”-Kyozoku. “take this you fat ass!! Ninja Art: Blood Scyther!!” Before Kyozoku used his attack, Ino interfered. “Oh no you don’t. Mind Disturbance Jutsu!!” With that Kyozoku attacked Hidan instead of Choji. With Hidan under the Kagemane, he was an easy target. But as the scythe got closer to Hidan, Shika grew tired and was having a hard time holding the jutsu. “Why is Shikamaru sweating?” questioned Ino.
Suddenly as the scythe was close to hitting Hidan. Hidan broke free of the jutsu, with only a scratch. “Fuck You Kyozoku. You cut me in my face you Idiot!!” “As much as I would like to take the credit, that wasn’t me.” answered Hidan’s brother. Hidan then noticed Ino doing a weird hand sign, and figured that his brother was under her control. So he launched his scythe, attached to a chain, towards her. Choji quickly went to her aid, but it was Ino who stopped the jutsu and jumped out of the way.
As Hidan retracted his scythe to unleash his next attack, another scythe was coming his way. He manage to escape that attack as well. “You bastard, who’s fault was that?!”-Hidan. “Yours!! You shouldn’t have gotten cut.”-Kyozoku. “Damn, his Blood Scythe attack. Once it cut someone, it uses the victims blood as a seeker. And only target’s that enemy, until it kills them.” acknowledged Hidan. He quickly thought of a plan. He remembered that he still had Takigi’s blood. He drew his Jashin symbol, and swallowed Takigi’s blood. Symbol drawn, and body black, he just stood there and deliberately left himself open for the scythe.
Shika tried stopping the scuthe with his Kage Nui, but the scythe just cut thru them. Choji wanted to use himself as a shield, but Ino didn’t let him. “Who knows how fast and powerful that scythe is?”-Ino. The question was answered, as the scythe schredded a bunch of trees. “HA HA HA!! THAT’S WHAT’S GOING TO HAPPEN TO YOUR DEAR SENSEI’S SON!!! WHAT BETTER WAY TO GO, THAN GOING THE WAY HIS FATHER WENT. MWAHAHAH!!!” Hidan’s taunt was directed towards Shikamaru. Who felt hopeless at the sight of Takigi, bleeding in Konohamaru’s arms. “NO, I CAN’T LOSE HIM TOO. I PROMISED KURENAI, I’LL PROTECT HIM!!” Shika sprang back to action and ran towards Hidan.
As the scythe was about to hit Hidan. It was stopped, by none other than KM. “Fuuton: Tempest Sphere Protection!!!” The windshield around Konohamaru reflected the scythe away from Hidan. This gave Team Shika the opportunity they needed, and decided to use new abilities just for this moment. Choji used ‘Human Boulder Force Unleash’. Hidan allowed himself to be hit. But Choji intetionally missed, he didn’t want to hurt him, that would hurt Takigi. He only pushed him away.This gave Ino the chance to use, “Mind Uncounsience Awakening” and “Mind Body Counsience Transfer!!” which was an upgrade to ‘Mind Body Transfer’, in which part of her consience took over Hidan’s body. Her main counsience was still in control of her body. While inside of Hidan’s body Ino jumped towards the sun, as high as Hidan can, while still giving a shadow. It was Shikamaru’s turn to use his new attack. He came up with this attack just incase he fought Hidan ever again. In a way, one can say that this jutsu was made for him. “KAGE SUPAIKU: RINJUU!!!*” Shikamaru gave an exclamatory scream.
Shadow spikes rose from the shadow that Hidan’s body gave out. These spikes were going to be his death bed. KM then came up with a better conclusion, upon seeing Kyozoku smiling at the teams plan, and made Kagabushins. ”We have to kill both at the same time!!” “That’s right! If I live he lives, and vice-versa.” “Which is why you DIE, TOGETHER!!!” said the clones as they hovered over Kyouzoku, giving Shikamaru the shadow he needed to kill Kyozoku as well.
Kyozoku realized this and jumped out of the way, but more and more clones started to come out. No matter where he went there were clones. “Enough games. I never liked pin the tail on the donkey.” stated KM, about Kyozoku evading him. ”EVERYONE GATHER AROUND SHIKAMARU. LET’S END THIS!!! OMOI KAGE BUSHIN NO JUTSU.” That was KM’s version of the massive shadow clone technique. The clones quickly started stacking on each other. Giving Kyozoku no where to go. But it was Takigi who stoped him in his tracks, with his new technique. “Kokage no Jutsu!” (transalates to Treeshade Technique.) This technique acted as both Kagemane and Kage Nui, in which the ‘branches’ acted as the tentacles.
After everyone gathered around Shikamaru, Takigi via KM’s Shadow Clone, Shikamaru activated his new attack on every shadow avalable. Shadow formed Spikes stabbed both brothers in all places. However, Shikamaru wasn’t sure and decided to make sure they never have to deal with Hidan, or his brother for that matter, ever again. So he took extra messures, and ‘finished’ them off.
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* Shadow Spike: Deathbed.
I couldn’t decide what ending to do, out of the two I had in mind. So I decided to do both, and let you decide on what the ‘true’Â should be. I will latter edit it with the ‘TRUE’ ending.
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Ending One -Â Shikamaru takes revenge w/o killing.
While their bodies were still on the spikes, Shikamaru seperated the spikes that were holding Kyozoku. This ripped his body to six pieces. But left Hidan alive, as Ino could still see trough his eyes. “Shikama-” “I know Ino, Hidan isn’t dead. I deliberately missed his organs to keep him alive.” “NANI?! Why?!”-rest of Team Shika. “Because, we’re better than him.” “That’s not your choice to make. He needs to die for waht he did.”-Takigi. “What about how we feel?!” ”Don’t worry. You can rest assure, he is going to pay for what he did to ALL of us.” Shikamaru turns to Hidan. “He took a great man from us. A beloved Sensei. A caring Uncle. And a boys Father, he never met. HE IS GOING TO PAY.” Shikamaru then gives the team a plan.
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“Ino release him from your jutsu. Let him see his brother’s body. And take care of Takigi.” As Hidan regained his body he saw all five of his opponets holding a piece of his brother. “You bastards!! I’ll kill you all. Just let me go of this Shadow-things and you’ll see.” “Hurts to see someone you care about dead, does it.”-Konohamaru. “He’s not dead. Just not in tact.”-Shikamaru. “That’s right, as long as one of us is alive the other can’t die. You should of killed me when you could.”-Hidan. “And for the record, I can care less about my brother. He’s just a scapegoat to me. The only reason I care if he lives, is so I can.”
“I figured as such, so here’s what’s going to happen.” stated Shikamaru as his team started to leave one by one. “Each one of us is going to keep one of your brother’s body parts, and hide it in a place where only that person knows. Your going to keep his head, so he can see for you.” “See for me? What are you talking abou-.” Hidan was interrupted, as two tentacles plucked out his eyes. “AAHHHHH!!!! YOU ASSHOLE, THAT FUCKING HURT!!!” “If you really care about your brother, for whatever reason, you’ll look for the rest of him.” continued Shikamaru as he untaped Kyozoku’s mouth and left with his part. “Have a ‘nice’ life together, you two. Or should I say One and a fifth.” That was the last time Hidan ever ’saw’ and heard Shikamaru ever again.
Hidan spent the rest of his life hearing his brother’s complaints, harrasments, and insults. At times, he felt like just leaving his brother’s head, and living alone. But he couldn’t risk his brother’s body being hurt, and living without sight. Hidan lived the rest of his life in complete agunizing torture.
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Ending Two - Shikamaru takes revenge w/killing.
While their bodies were still on the spikes, Shikamaru started seperating the spikes holding them. Ino saw Hidan’s body starting to seperate. She gave Shikamaru the Ok. “Don’t worry about me. This is just a part of me.”-Hidan under Ino’s control. “The real me is right here. Do what you need to do.”-Ino. Shikamaru then looked at the rest of his team. “Let’s finish this.”-Choji. “We came here for this. There’s no stopping now.”-Takigi. “Uncle Asuma won’t rest in peace, until They rest in pieces.”-KM.
With that all said, Shikamaru continued his attack. Ripping them to pieces, killing them instantly. “There it’s done. It’s finished.”-Shikamaru. “Finally this nightmare that is Hidan is over!”-Ino. “Yeah, you said it.”-Choji.
“Ino-chan?”-Takigi. “What happened?”-Ino “You said something about ‘that not being really you’, what you mean?” “Oh, that. Well, during my training, I realized that my jutsus left me at a certain dissadvantage. So I trained as much as I could and came up with a way to counter that.”-Ino “She invented a new jutsu that only used a part of her personality and/or memory, and not all of her. Basically the ‘Ino’ that died in Hidan, was just a part of her brain.” “And what ‘part’ of her was that?”-Shikamaru. “Don’t know? What part did you use butterfly?”-Choji. “Butterfly? Who you calling butterfly?”-Ino. “Nani?”-rest. “Did you use the memory of us being married? How could you? Oh the horror!!”-Choji. “Hahaha. I was just kidding, Piggy. I would never do that. He-he.” “Then wish one was it?!”-Team Shika. “I . . . . .I don’t remember.”-Ino. “WHHAAAAAAAATTT!!!”-Konohamaru, Takigi, and Choji. “Well, obviously. It’s not in her anymore.”-Shikamaru.
With that the team went back home. Victorous. Since then, Chojimade it his personal mission to find out what memory/personality his wife got rid of. And she would always act as if she didn’t know, when she really did.
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Well finally done. I’m going to kick back now and take a walk. Hope you guys enjoyed this series. To the next generation of FanFic bloggers, hope this inspires you to keep on writing. It’s been fun. One more series and I’ll be finished.









I forgot to make this ‘Commentable’. My bad. Now you can comment all you want.
YO zep bout time! I was first. But this really was a good post man. Congrats! Sorry wish i had more to say but that it. BYE!
I would have been first except there was no comment and then I had wrestling
gj zep, and good luck on lifes journey
gj zep man im gonna miss u dude freaking epic
waahhhh…..im a visual learner…!!!
No photos less understand for me…
but this post makes my visual learning thing dissappear…LOL!!
BY da way!!!GUUUUUDDD JJJUUUUBB!!
GJ zep i like the 2nd ending best
well it’s gonna be hard to lose your blogs but we still have some other fanfics
zomfg zep, that was the longest shit i eva read.
it was very useful lol.
Very nice conclusion xP loved it mate, and thx for those breaks hehe
Best conclusion ever
Zep one day you can grow into a pro. I love your work! To honor it as a parting comment, I’ll go into details:
This serie was pure magic! Mainly because your development of the characters (understanding and fidelity to each original personally… ) This helped you to made successful a great moment of this chap… I indeed figured out that Konohamaru was faking Shika the moment he talked proud. (you did it great Zep, like a pro you gave us hints to guess)
But I could not recon Ino, Choji, in this last Chap, and I never learned to care about the new characters.
You did It amazingly well in the serie taking care of a multiplicity of aspects (psychological, sociological and …) when you made up a future for the characters.
I think you may work on the “writing stile†for the battles. Only to help readers to understand faster, therefore we will be transported to the battle without effort. I believe this is needed when you have many characters or more than one battle in one scenario.
* May be a classic: divide dialogues by paragraphs, use especial characters and quotation marks …
* You may add same minor descriptions or hints for EACH attack, so the reader will see immediately a mental image of each jutsu, without looking at a dictionary or learning all.
(for each Katon: Give size or color or shape of the flames; ….etc)
My English is a shame, but I think you can add more color to your descriptions.
SORRY PPL I must change language:
Encontré buenas moraleja en cada capÃtulo, pero en la batalla te faltó pulirla. Era como si hubieses estado deseoso de acabar y ya.
Pasar el corrector ortográfico no serÃa mala idea.
Espero sinceramente que algún dÃa escribas algo totalmente original y desarrolles tus personajes con el mismo empeño que aquà conservaste a los de Kishi. Tenés un don para cautivar, entretener, y transportar a los lectores. Pocos tienen ese don! Desarrollalo y aplicalo, si no es como escritor profesional, al menos a modo de complemento para tus actividades académicas o profesionales.
EXITOS!
S_U
PS. SORRY ABOUT THIS LONG BILINGUAL COMMENT
I like the first ending better, though the second ending is cool, but if she keeps using that technique, she’s not gonna remember anything. This one was well worth the wait. Awesome job!
gracias Uchiha de Plata. Tus commentarios, si que son de mucha alluda. La proxima sera asi como tu desistes.
AND I need more comments!!! I want to know how good, or bad this was. I need to know what I lack, and what I should keep doing. ty.
I agree Sokka.But like all great techniques, it’s like a double-egded sword. And, she ONLY losses that memory/personality IF the person she has in control dies. IF not, she’s cool.
And for those that want to know what she lost it was . . . I’ll say later, when I get more comments.
I thought it was good except you should have explained the battles by breaking down the fight into part and then giving each characters veiw on each part a different paragraph because I disliked the way you went back and showed what really happened (From Shikamarus point of view) by discribing it rather than telling it from konahamaru’s point of veiw at least a little bit to make the facts clearer.
I totalley agree with firelordsokka and S_U have a good point to. I don’t have any comment of mine
Anyway you Rock, your Rule, you are the best fiction writter that I had ever read )that is not a pro).
I will miss to read your work Zep
And I will ways be gratefull because you were one of the guys that helped me to turns tables in my life. You are one of the shannaro’s heroes in my life ! THANKS
This is the longest blog I had EVER read. It took me 3 days (literally) to read it…but it’s pay of.
I already told you so many time how I love your J-A-T blogs and this 10 years and after blogs with missions. You are my favorite fanfic writer but I have to made 1 little critique-Why you,although you know how good are you,still asking ppl for their comments. Anyway our comments/suggestions are always prefer on structure of your blog. Not even once we give you bad feedback comment on your story ’cause it’s simple brilliant.
What can I say that don’t sound like a kissing up to you.
We already told you how awesome you are.What I trying to say that You should have to work more on yourself confidence and just believe in yourself no mater what other ppl say(like Naruto).
Why I saying this ’cause later in life you may find out (I’m hoping you will not ) that not all ppl wish you good. Some ppl will be jealous at you,at your talent and they will say bad critique about your work and if you don’t have mental stability to go through that you will not succeed and I don’t want to see that happened to you.
Best wishes in life Zep.
P.S.I hope you understand everything I said if not I’m sorry ’cause my English vocabulary is only on this level.
huh…that was a long comment and I not even mentioned this blog.This was great blog and ’cause my English is bad I’ll use with SU words “..You did It amazingly well in the series taking care of a multiplicity of aspects (psychological, sociological and …) when you made up a future for the characters…”
I like 1st ending better simple ’cause as you said Shika and the gang are better than him(but 2nd was good also).This was the perfect ending of this LOOONG series.
WOW this was an amazing job.Man i sure pity Hidan.A life full of tortures awaites.Good job shika!
Zep well done again!
I will never forget you ZEP!!!
All the ppl here will miss you too.
I can’t believe you are gone (to take care of your spetial mission in the wild world). Tears on my face.
I wish you farewell
I wish you Faith, Hope, Joy
I wish you happyness
I wish you succeses
I wish you LOVE
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