Post Author: Spirit
Im going to attempt to write a few poems about the characters that mean the most to me. This series has shed so much emotion, its time to return the favor. If you enjoy poems as I do, then I hope you like these, if not, sorry this probably isn’t the blog for you.
Naruto:
Solitary since birth, with no one to love.
The villagers shun me, the kids like to shove.
Until that day in the forest, I found I wasn’t alone.
A force lay inside me, I am the home.
With my team right beside me, and sensei in front,
My life is going well, I am happy for once.
Where are you going, stop running away.
You were like a brother to me, I need you Sasuke.
Only one thing in mind, throw away other tasks,
I’ll never surrender, I will bring you back.
Kakashi:
I was a man of rules,
Until that unholy day.
It was I acting like the fool.
Obito showed me the way.
And even though I keep my cool,
My heart is not made of clay.
Emotions surge in the violent pool,
That is Kakashi Hatake…
Shikimaru:
All these duties and tasks are something I dread.
Always asking me to seek a solution from my head.
“Find an answer,” is what she said.
Shut up, I want to sleep; go back to my bed.
But I always cave in to our Hokage of med,
For she is the one that saved my best friend.
So I will continue to tediously shred my head.
Until my disciple is ready to spread.
Sasuke:
All attention in the world, all the skill I’ve attained,
Nothing matters now, my home is no more.
There is only one direction my sights are aimed,
With thunder in my hand, an Uchiha will roar.
I’m still no good, whats happened to me?
Even the one I called friend is matching my skill.
No matter how much it pains me, I must leave this beloved team,
More power is the way that my goal will be fulfilled.
The time has come, I’ll avenge the lost.
Come to me Kirin, vanquish my kin.
Just before he fell, an unusual emotion was tossed.
I thought for once, it was old brother again.
The masked Uchiha has convinced me the truth,
Or at least he thinks.
His true intentions I will uncouth,
Until then I shall continue to sink.
I’m sorry old comrades, I meant you no harm.
Until this is finished I must play the roll.
One day I’ll return with no sword in arm,
After I have repaid for my brother’s lost soul.
Jiraiya:
If they were still around,
Maybe I would stay.
My best friend and my student….
At least the memories never fade.
I have but one more duty,
Please wait for me Tsunade.
This battle is a fierce one,
The destined decision I must make.
Unfortunately I won’t be able to return,
I’m sorry, but it is my time to drift away…
But a new hope brews in Konoha.
Uzumaki will reign one day.
That is it this time guys. I’m not claiming that these are any awesome pieces of work, but writing is something that is fun to me.
45 responses so far ↓
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Naruhina1 (Chunin Squad Leader)
// Aug 26, 2008 at 7:40 amwow…….they are like sooooooo good……they were so emotional…i loved them
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FirelordSokka (Jonin)
// Aug 26, 2008 at 8:00 amthat was cool! Great job! I hope there’s gonna more!
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Chaos (ANBU Elite)
// Aug 26, 2008 at 8:03 amThe Poems… not so bad acshully… not bad at all acshully, kinda’ good acshully… awesome acshully…
I liked Jiraiya’s mostly… nice…
I wish I could be motivated to write. too…
alas, I am swimming in a ocean of laziness…
Laziness… ftw acshully…
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ingelund (Chunin Squad Leader)
// Aug 26, 2008 at 8:13 amThat was a very good blog… Keep it commin’
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Sothe (J's little uke)
// Aug 26, 2008 at 8:32 amHOLY CRAP! Okay, you win. They were actually dam good. When I sa this scheduled I knew itd have to be something dam good to go down well, and you pulled it off x 10. So well done Spirit!
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the chosen one (Genin)
// Aug 26, 2008 at 8:59 amhey great job! i liked the pervy sages the best sniff sniff poor pervy sage. rip. o o you should include lee in the next round of these(should there be a next round) i think lee’s story lends itself to a poem well
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Sothe (J's little uke)
// Aug 26, 2008 at 9:24 amI think we can officially say SPIRIT FTW!!!!!!
nd Chosen Ones right, Lee would be funny
And I look forward to Gaara as well!
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Lady Hinata62 (Newbie)
// Aug 26, 2008 at 10:19 amthat was cool and amazing.
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Laydee Kay (Troll Slayer)
// Aug 26, 2008 at 10:48 amIt was an excellent idea for Bob to give you author status. [Regardless of the people who were a bit pissy at that.] Your poems are quite expressive and emotional. They actually center around the character and their greatest issues or life events. And the pictures that you added, ingenious touch. Pictures always help with writing. All I have to say as a veteran author is, well done, Spirit.
Though I suggest you add your avatar and “Post Author: Spirit” at the very top. :3 So people can appreciate who wrote this.
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Bob, where the hell are you, Oh Lazy Oneness? Don’t force me to email you.
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NarutoElitNin (Chunin Squad Leader)
// Aug 26, 2008 at 11:45 amthe poems where greate…but i didn’t read the sasuke poeam(dont get me wrong but i dont like sasuke)but the rest of them where perfec, but narutos poem was a litle schetchy
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WhiteFangofkonaha (ANBU Agent)
// Aug 26, 2008 at 12:30 pmGj spirit show these noobs ur skills cough* sk jk
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WhiteFangofkonaha (ANBU Agent)
// Aug 26, 2008 at 12:42 pmladykee how violent of u :O lol jk
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Sothe (J's little uke)
// Aug 26, 2008 at 12:59 pmLadykays back again? fo’ real this time? PAIRINGS?!!!111
Anyway, I do agree with her…for once
you are dam good.
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Laydee Kay (Troll Slayer)
// Aug 26, 2008 at 1:06 pmWhiteFangofKonoha, yes, I’m very violent. That’s quite possibly my worst threat ;]
Sothe, yes, I’m back. :] The last Pairings blog is going to be up on September 1st.
And WHAT DO YOU MEAN “for once”? Eh??
XDXDXD
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WhiteFangofkonaha (ANBU Agent)
// Aug 26, 2008 at 1:23 pmLOL no wonder ur avatar has sakura being violent
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Futodoki (Chunin Squad Leader)
// Aug 26, 2008 at 1:23 pmNarutoElitNin I hate Sasuke too, but you know, this one is really good. It’s not what you would think it is. Spirit did a really good job. Makes ya think. ;D
I too love writing so this was so uber! ^-^ Spirit you’re my fav person right now~!! *high five*
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Iruka (#16 Hockey Dude)
// Aug 26, 2008 at 1:25 pmSpirit your poems are great. Very expressive and right to the point. All them tell of the person’s life. You were able to tie all the turmoil with great emotion. I only wish I was half as talented as you when it came to poetry. Good job
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Ninja J (Genin)
// Aug 26, 2008 at 2:17 pmGreat job on the poems there, Spirit, who doesn’t appreaciate a good poem every now and again.
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Futodoki (Chunin Squad Leader)
// Aug 26, 2008 at 2:35 pmA stupid person that’s who Ninja J~! ToT
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ZepWolfX (Father of SHANNARO FanFics)
// Aug 26, 2008 at 2:41 pmNice poems Spirit. Are you going to do more? You know like, Hinata, Neji, and the rest.
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Suna no Ken (Chunin Squad Leader)
// Aug 26, 2008 at 3:07 pmoh man dude that was beutiful. I liked the jaryai one most of all. Man these were awesome. GJ
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ssj sasuke (Team Shannaro!)
// Aug 26, 2008 at 4:03 pmBob could see the hidden potential in this great author, but can he see why kids like Cinnamon Toast Crunch?
Haha no but seriously this was probably one of my favorite blogs since I have joined Shannaro! I’m not asking you, I’m telling you, you better make another one!
The way you captured the emotions of each of these characters, telling not only a story, but incorporating your own theories, and the emotions you pit toward them as well, man you are one hell of a writer.
There is no question, you are awesome. Keep it up, your bud,
-ssj
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Futodoki (Chunin Squad Leader)
// Aug 26, 2008 at 5:28 pmLMAO ssj sasuke!! Cinnamon Toast Crunch!?! I’m loling in rl man, nice~! xD
OMG SPIRIT!! The very first pic, with Naruto and Yondame (is that his name?) well omg it’s just amazing~! It’s like I feel it you know? O_o” It touches my heart~…wow I’m such a Narutard. \)^o^(/
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Futodoki (Chunin Squad Leader)
// Aug 26, 2008 at 5:29 pmO_o” Dangit! My little brother switched my parenthesis keys again!! *Inner Futodoki: SHANNAROOOOO~!!!*
\(^o^)/
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Ninja J (Genin)
// Aug 26, 2008 at 5:45 pmMan, i’m so inspired to make some poems of my own, i’m not sure they will be as good as Spirit’s though…
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Spirit (Team Shannaro!!!)
// Aug 26, 2008 at 5:56 pmHaha Chaos, ssj, you guys crack me up. Futodoki, its nice to see they affected you so positively. Lady K, I’m honored that you enjoyed it
To all the rest of you, I’m very happy to hear that you enjoyed them as much as I enjoyed making them.
And yes, there will be more, I already have some written down, I just wanted to see the response on these before I made another blog of new ones.
Thanks again guys
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nine@tailed@girl (Jonin)
// Aug 26, 2008 at 8:11 pmSpirit, those poems were amazing. you totally deserved that author position and congrats again. keep it up and i’m looking forward to more posts from u
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Tenkage (Chunin Squad Leader)
// Aug 26, 2008 at 8:29 pmNice job. I write too but my stuff is more ’specialized’.
Lol, Bob’s going to get a Sakura Punch from Laydee Kay!!!
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lady hinata (Chunin)
// Aug 26, 2008 at 8:42 pmYou got me! Those poems were really good! I’m now officially a Spirit fan.
Putting the characters’ thoughts into poems is very creative. I was most intrigued by how you depicted Sasuke… hmm… so he’s going down the Itachi path, huh? However, it seems to me that bridges have been burned. If he turns out to be a good guy in the end, I hope it wouldn’t be too late to renew his ties with his former comrades.
Can you make one for Hinata? Thanks.
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i.o. (Shannaro Defender)
// Aug 26, 2008 at 9:53 pmthats funny. i was actually planning on doing a poem for a blog. kukukukuku……………… but yeah, awesome job dude. I love the idea of each character having their own poem. Nice. but overall, awesome blog. Truly an amazing author……….well after me of course. hahahahahaha……………just kidding.
KEEP UP THE SPIRIT………um………SPIRIT!!!!!!
io
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RiVaL DeaThWiSh (Chunin Squad Leader)
// Aug 27, 2008 at 12:42 am..im crying..
Tears Of Joy Man…
This Is So Great…
The Poet Dude..! Spirit..
What A MasterPiece..
Still RiVaL Deathwish.. Signing Out..! Rawr!
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ians091 (Chunin Squad Leader)
// Aug 27, 2008 at 1:46 amoMG!!!!huhuhu!!!sPiriT!!!!
u haB the PoeM magiC that Makes alL nArutaRds cRy!!!!toUChed!!!huhuhu!!!even the happiest man n da worLd…..cry!!!even if ians birthday s todaaY!!!!!hahaha…lol…spIrIt….
5star…….the s rank/kage rank poet of whole naruverse!!!!
make more poeT….plzz include TobI!!!gud lUk
ians birthday s today!!!!ian will be more good!!
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tailedfox (Jonin)
// Aug 27, 2008 at 2:38 amWow Awesome stuff Spirit.
it was reeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaali good, u good poet xD
It was damn good, seriously very good, emotional specially Jiraiya’s one. You should write some based on some other charc, like Itachi, and others ones. But im sure Itachi’s one would make us [the readers] Cry.
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DeOn (Genin)
// Aug 27, 2008 at 3:13 am>>>>Wow! Very cool! I’m having a nosebleed right now( hehehehe). The words are so meaningful and it is sooo emotional… I really like all of them…they fit in the characters life…really touchy. Thry can really struck the hearts of the naruto anime lovers!!!
Hail to SPIRIT!!! =)
Hail to Naruto!!!=)
Hail to all naruto lovers!!!=)
Hail to all characters!!! =)
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DeOn (Genin)
// Aug 27, 2008 at 3:30 amand w8 i forgot something… NARUTARDS!!!! RULEZZZZ>>>!!!! hehehe.. good luck dude!! ^^
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Spirit (Team Shannaro!!!)
// Aug 27, 2008 at 4:02 amHaha Chaos, ssj, you guys crack me up. Futodoki, its nice to see they affected you so positively. Lady K, I.O., Zep, I’m honored that you enjoyed it
To all the rest of you, I’m very happy to hear that you enjoyed them as much as I enjoyed making them.
And yes, there will be more, I already have some written down, I just wanted to see the response on these before I made another blog of new ones.
Thanks again guys
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eighthHokage (Jonin)
// Aug 27, 2008 at 5:05 amYou are very talented poem writer. I really enjoyed.Every poem describe true personality of each character.Good job,Spirit.
“..I’m sorry old comrades, I meant you no harm.
Until this is finished I must play the roll.
One day I’ll return with no sword in arm,
After I have repaid for my brother’s lost soul.”
I like this part in particular because I still have hope that Sasuke is good guy and that he will eventually come back to Konoha as a true hero.
P.S.I don’t know for you guys but this blog inspired me to make some poem too!
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Naruto Uzumaki (Examiner)
// Aug 27, 2008 at 8:12 amThat was pretty good.
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Ultimatehokage (Jounin Elite)
// Aug 27, 2008 at 12:35 pmOne of the best post, great job spirit
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RiVaL DeaThWiSh (Chunin Squad Leader)
// Aug 28, 2008 at 12:13 amHmmm… Can I Comment Once More..?
Well I Would Just Wish To Tell You..
uhmm..
its Not That Really Good To Express This But..
I Would Just Like To Say..
If Its Possible Don’t Use one Word Twice..
*Cuz Sometimes It doesn’t fit To where The Line Is going..*
Oh And Another One..
Put Your Heart Into It..
I Know You Are.. but Put A little More..
Your Emotions Will Surely Get You There..!
Rock hard!.. Keep it PoET Dude..!
Make Every Poem THE BEST… As Every Word You Put In It Counts!..
Thats It..
RiVaL DeathWish Signing Out!.. Rawr!
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ZepWolfX (Father of SHANNARO FanFics)
// Aug 28, 2008 at 2:19 pmSpirit you have inspired me to do something I haven’t done in any of my blogs. I’m going to do a sad blog too. (Well, I already had a sad blog in mind, but now I’m going to put more thought into it.) If I don’t make anyone cry, then I didn’t do my job. Even if I have to kill someone, it will be sad danm it. And people WILL cry!!lol.
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Ninja J (Genin)
// Aug 28, 2008 at 3:34 pm@ZepWolfX
Well Zep, i’m thinkin about makin somethin sad
too, hope u don’t a little competition.
PS how did your animation( the neji gif next to your name) change?
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silver_uchiha (Tsunami-hime)
// Aug 29, 2008 at 5:32 amGreat poems! My favorite is Sasuke’s.
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SEPHIROTH13 (ANBU Elite)
// Sep 5, 2008 at 3:49 amFrom now on you are the Poet of Spirits ..Spirit.The poems are so good!!So good!!!!.Amazing man.
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