Fall of Pein, Rise of the Whirlpool, Part 7
Fall of Pein, Rise of the Whirlpool
Post Author: DarkLurker_4thLegacy
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Death Under the howling blood-red moon
With no more bodies at his disposal, this fight has come down to the wire.
“Now with one blow I will avenge my sensei and Hokage. “-Naruto
“Humph you don’t think I am that much of a push over do you boy?â€-Pein
“I’ll admit you are much stronger than I ever anticipated, but you don’t get to be as strong as I am without having a few cards up your sleeveâ€-Pein.
He looks up at the full moon above and think that its now or never; a silent, cold, lonely smile runs across his face. “I would never have dreamed that I’d be push to my limit and forced to use this jutsu in a fight with you.”-Pein.
SFX-sigh.
“Ultimate Ninja Art- Six Paths to One, Now you will see the true power of a god, and I will take you and this whole world to HELL!!â€-Pein.
Naruto is silent as he waits for what Pein has next but inside he knows within himself that this battle must end and must end quickly. He knows that he has pushed well beyond his normal limits already and has drawn on far much of the foxes chakra than his own, now there is a risk he may lose out to the fox and descend into darkness himself.
“Yes, it is time to end this battle, it will end with your death!”-Naruto
SFX-guttural howl
Naruto’s appearance again changes as does the landscape as Pein’s final jutsu begins. Naruto’s violet body begins to glow white,while Pein’s jutsu causes a time/space distortion to appear behind him. All around large chunks of land re being swallowed up even the moon which look like blood appears distorted by Pein’s jutsu.
“This looks similar to the jutsu Kakashi used to sever Deidira’s arm, a portal to another dimension! I must hit him into his own dimension somehow but how?”-thinks Naruto. “Its swallowing everything!!!”-Naruto
“I have prepared something very special just for you boy, a cozy little dimension where even the heat of the sun will seems like the cool of the shade by comparison”-Pein. “We had planned to extract that fox from you but I see now that it would be infinitely easier to just watch you die, even if I have to take this world with you!!”-Pein
Naruto says nothing because he’s thinking, “I could use the chakra cannon, I can build the chakra up inside me before I fire but I’d have to be much closer for it to be sure to hit him and I won’t be able to use my tails to focus the beam like before, he’ll know something’s up!”-Naruto thinking. “Shit!!!”-Naruto. Just then it hits him what to do.
Naruto charges off in blind fury, in what seems to be a wreckless full frontal attack with his right hand racking the ground as he goes. Pein makes no move as this is exactly what he expected, no what he wanted Naruto to do. Cold, deadly, sinister smiles are on both their faces as in unison the echo out “NOW ITS TIME FOR YOU TO DIEEEEEEE!!!!!!”-Naruto and Pein.
A blinding white flash pierces the darkness followed and and enormous explosion, the shockwave of which is felt by the Konoha 7. The clone that is with the Konoha 7 clutches his chest and screams in agony before dispersing in a cloud of smoke, this makes everyone fear that the worst has happened. Shikamaru can hold no longer and asks Neji what the hell just happened.
Neji activates his Byakugan and the hangs his head. “There is no sign of Naruto….but… there is no sign of Pein either….I …. I…..I don’t know what happened I can’t sense either of them anywhere!”-Neji.
“Akamaru lets go!”-Kiba and without pause Kiba and Akamaru charge off to find their friend. “Kiba wait!!!…man he’s always charging in. Well standing here wont help anything lets go find Naruto”-Shikamaru. Everyone nods approval and the team is again on the move. What they find when they arrive is terrific destruction as the village lies in ruins, everything is destroyed. All the building have been burnt to cinders…there is no life anywhere. There are huge craters where it seems like the land was ripped out.
Elsewhere in a dank and dark cave, Zetsu appears.
SFX-zuzuzu
“Was the battle successful, do we have the nine-tails?”-Madara interrogates Zetsu.
“Pein…is …. dead…”a pair of red Sharingan’s open and pierce through Zetsu even he can’t believe the murderous intent in those eyes.
“So Naruto won then?”-Sasuke’s voice echoing from the darkness.
“Yes he won…. but… he’s terribly weak might not even survive, I was lucky to escape myself!”-Zetsu.
“Intriguing!”-Sasuke as he activate his new MS.
“I never thought that the Master of Pain would have fallen to a brat like that!”-Madara
“THAT BRAT! is far stronger than you could ever imagine, he is driven he will not be defeated easily.”-Sasuke interrupts.
“Sounds like you still have attachments to this boy…Sasuke!…May I remind you of our plans…..”-Madara
He is again interrupted by Sasuke and a frighteningly dead stare from Sasuke’s MS:
“Do not pretend to be able to order me around…YOU RELIC!”-Sasuke as he closes his eyes and fades into the black of the cave.
Back at the battle site Shikamaru, Ino, Kiba, Yamato, Neji and Sakura are all calling frantically for Naruto, but he is nowhere to be seen. The young hero stumbles from behind a burnt tree stump behind everyone. It is Kiba and Akamaru who see him, well smell him and run to his aid. Naruto falls to one knee before being caught by Kiba, the last of the wounds inflicted by drawing on so much of the foxes chakra healing before Kiba’s very eyes. Sakura and Ino rush to give whatever aid they can.
In a weakened voice “is he dead, did I win?”-Naruto. “Yes you did it Naruto”-Yamato “and lived to tell about it”-adds Sakura clutching Naruto’s hand to her chest which as expected Ino sees. Within the hour Naruto is back on his feet although still weak from his battle. Sakura can’t help but notice that his injuries healed much faster than any he has had before when using the fox’s chakra. But it is Neji that first asks the burning question….
“Naruto where where you, you disappeared I couldn’t sense or see you Kiba and Akamaru couldn’t smell you, so where the hell were you?”-Neji.
“Pein was extremely powerful his last ditch attack was to open up a portal to another dimension and to suck me and everything else in, including all the world if he had to, and it worked!”-Naruto
“NANI!!”-everyone
“I managed to knock him into his own dimension but I was caught there as well, I used one of my father’s teleportation jutsu to escape, when you found me I had just barely managed to make it back”-Naruto.
“Anyway the 6th will want to hear all about it so lets just get you home.”-Yamato
“Yeah, I’m sure Hinata can’t wait to see that you’re alright”-Kiba
SFX:sigh
“Hinata”-Naruto with a soft smile on his face.
Ino giggles “looks like he’s finally seen that she likes him”-Ino. Sakura says nothing.
With that the seven make there way back for the village.
Awesome DL! This is BY FAR the best part of this series.High drama,great action sequences,in one word… amazing.
Did you leave some space for love triangle? If stupid Sakura thinks that she can now be with Naruto she will just end up with broken hart,
This is so good that I need another dose soon.
One question: I thought that Madara is dead!?
DUDE!!! That was Mega-Frickin-AWESOME!!!! Holy Crap! I only wish the fight between Naruto and Pein ends up like this. That was top notch and very well done.
Two very enthusiastic thumbs up!
man I reallY loved this! Finally Pein Has been killed and all is well for naruto. But waht is this? madara and sasuke seem to have a plan of their own regarding naruto?!. Can some one say sequal?! DL this is the best one yet and I cant say enough how awesome it rocked. Waiting for series two!
omg yes!!!!! @ suna ! sasuke seems preetty mad at the fact naruto keeps on getting stronger!! and to use his father’s jutsu was amazing!
DUDE THIS RULED BEST ONE YET
kishi might be well advised to steal a few ideas. thats a seriously good blog wicked to the max
noicely done DL you did one hell of a job i don’t want it to be over! make a fall of madara rise of whirlpool or something like that!
is that better guruku?
DL nice story. great drama. Extremely creative. You seriously should right a fanatasy book or something like that. You are awesome at writing fanfic. I like it that Pein is sucked into his own void but so does Naruto. But through Naruto’s creativeness he teleported out. The ending was fenominal. I like it how you left it. There could be another story in Sasuke vs Madara or both them go after Naruto.
That was amazing, great job. I felt like this really did happen in the anime. Hope it does because I cant wait to see what happens with saske. I wounder if he will be the one to kill marada and zetsu.
Dude, you make me proud. Awesome blog, keepup the good work.
This blog is so cool man this chspter is better thn I thought! I wonder if you are going to keep on making more this is so cool!
Oh, and I just forgot to include this. Nice Hinata cameo. Very nicely done.
Can anyone tell me how to put the previous chapter links at the top of my post like DarkLuther did with the previous chapters of The Fall of Pein Rise of the Whirlpool at the top!
Use this html code ontop of your blog.
(a href=”") url site here (/a)
Replace the paranthesis with less than and greater than signs respectively.
Good job DL, are you going to continue this or start a new blog? (Quiting is not an option)
thats very interesting to know zep, not that I have time to write many blogs, but I think we need a best series blog, to display all our favorite fan-fics that we discussed on your recent post…
That was so freakin awsome seriuosly great job,
it was really creative too i like the nine-tailed fox pic the most, overall it gets a perfect 10.
Man I just hope that DL doesnt stop making these Awesome posts! i have to say that a new series/spinoff of this post would be/could be more awesome then anything he has written before!
WTF!!DL!!!You Got The REALly GooD JOb MaN!!iM ConTeNted BouT thiS TopIC!!!But Still PeIN Is Too StrOng….tHAt VioLEt NInE TaiL ThiNG CoOL!!!AnyWayS Nice BloG DL!!!KEwl DEwD!!!
Actually Ive Never read The Series all Of Them.. I’ve Never Touched Any.. Maybe I Should Read so.. It Sounds Good..
NICE!!!! Interesting development. I wonder, will you follow through with the naruhina or will he have a forbidden triangle? But I loved it, truly awesome job DL.
GJ DL
so naruto finnally realises hinata likes him was about time
I A BIG BIG BRAVO.DL you stunned me with this part.I am amazed.One of the best blogs i have ever read.The plot is so good and it’s perfect.So are you going to put Sasuke and Madara in the game too?Man that would be great.Naruto was amazing at this series.Hope he is at the real manga when he’s done with his trainning.
Sorry for the off topic but i have to say this!Pleasure and Pain your avatar is AWESOME!!!!
hahahahaha!!!!
Wow awesome stuff DL, as expected of you mate. Wast waiting for this chapter for ages and im glad to say it was worth waiting for somting like this, it was just awsesome. I just loved the ending, i was waiting for this moment for Naruto to rip Pein’s head xD wat a great idea rippin his head in his own dimension.
Oh and btw i hope u dont stop just yet coz we are loving it bro. I hope u just keep writing and end with Naruto killing off Madara or Sasuke somtin like it. And i hope u write more of wat happens wen naruto get back to the village coz we hve seen him improving his skills greatly but we hvnt seen him improving his own knowledge and personality, like finally gettin together wit Hinata
thanx much Seph it was a hilarious one!!!
woaahhh..really great, even i didn’t yet read the part1-6..but i’ve catch up this enthusiastic story…
i was really amaze to you bro…have m0re story…^^
I’m so late on this post >.>
This was Mega…no, Giga… no, Terra AMAZING !
Seems like Sasuke is playing his cards, Madara looks like he knows a rebellion against him will exist…
And Naruto was awesome… Teleportation RULES!!!
All i have to say is, FREAKING AWESOME
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Excellent work so far, DL!
Is Naruto Namikaze Uzumaki taking my name? Well there already is a Naruto uzumaki me
any way this was awsomeness. best one yet.
Dam man you did it, endings are always the hardest, congrats DL, your a great writer.
LOL @ the ending!
got damn!………that was awsome!! that was brillent. i loved it. congrats DL. i also agree…..you ar a great writer. i love endings they are the best part in a story.^_^
>> i have nothing to say! but to say it’s the best! hehehehe!! ,,,,, i love IT ^^,,
WOW guys it really has been a very long time but I’m still here. I am so very glad that you guys loved it, the end was deliberate i am planning to continue writing more series. I loved developing the story as much as you all loved seeing it develop. If’ you haven’t read ‘em all read ‘em the essence is lost if you don’t.
ohh…thank you all for the encouragement. I will keep writing.
Hey darkLurker_4thLegacy…… I Was Thinking Dat U should continue your blogs n stuff cuz i thionk they need 2 make naruto wit ur therioes……4 real u need 2 keep going with this n then make naruto meet up wit sasuke n fight n so on n so forth…….im serious u should do dat cuz in da manga they make naruto suck 4 real……. n u make him so much better so if any body agree’s wit me post a comment n write 123 …. thank u
ps. ( i kno my spelling is fucked up im workin on dat lol)……
thanks zo914 i intend to.
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no fricking way darklurker wrote Rise of the Whirlpool this was my first fanfic i read in this
site.
this was his last blog post
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