Post Author: Yellowflash Naruto2
Minato and his teammates with their new squad leader journey through the forest with General Zakura to the Whirlpool Country.
Jiraiya: Alright, guys don’t wonder off away from the squad this mission is dangerous, were escorting the Whirlpool countries best General we have to be careful.
Minato:Right Sensei! You heard him guys stay alert.
Kara:Sensei, How much longer until we reach the border of the Whirlpool?
Jiraiya: About two hours!
Draka: Man, that’s too long, are there any short cuts?
Jiraiya:You guys are asking to many questions, this is the fastest way, so stop…… ( An exploding kunai lands right next to Jiraiya which makes a huge explosion!)
Minato:Jiraiya, sensei! Oh no guys protect the General!
( Kara and Draka rush to the Generals side with their kunai ’s ready.)
A Cloud ninja dashes towards the General and uses his umbrella, Ninja Art: One Thousand Needle Barrage. Draka uses Earth Style: Rock Formation, a series of rocks come together and protect them from the needles. Then Minato appears on top of the rocks and forms hands signs Fire Style: Dragon Breath Bomb, a huge fire ball comes out shaped like a dragon head which envelopes the cloud ninja.
Cloud Ninja: Nice jutsu but its not enough, Lightning style: Thunder Strife, a ball of lightning flies toward Team 4.
Jiraiya:I don’t think so! Summoning Jutsu: Toad Devourer. ( A toad eats the jutsu, the ninja loses track of Jiraiya until he appears in his shadow and uses Fire style: Toad Flame Bomb, the ninja is burned severely, but is still alive!
Jiraiya: I know you didn’t come on this mission alone where are your other squad members?
Cloud Ninja: They are gone , I came to scan the perimeter and then I found you and decided to attack!
Minato:You are stupid, a shinobi should never attack if he knows he is going to lose!
Cloud Ninja: I didn’t plan on losing, in fact I didn’t! ( The ninja opens his shirts filled with explosive note tags ) You all are dead!
Jiraiya:Everyone go now! ( The whole area is destroyed )…. A Few hours later Jiraiya awakens and his squad is no where to be found!
Minato awakens along side of the General and his friends! The blast separated them! The General is knocked out and the cloud ninja is gone!
Kara:What do we do? Our Sensei is gone maybe even de..!
Minato:Don’t say that he is not dead! So calm down, we have to protect the General! Kara! check him to see if he is alive! Me and Draka will look around for Sensei, if you don’t find him in an hour return here and we will get the General to the Whirlpool no matter what!
Draka: But we don’t know what direction the country is!
Minato:Jiraiya said it was two more hours from here in the western direction, So lets move, you check left I’ll go Right!
Kara: You guys be careful that explosion could have alerted more enemies!
Minato: Right! you just hide out here, we will take care of the rest!
A few miles away on a hill the Cloud ninja and the rest of his squad stands.
Cloud ninja:We’ve got them right where we want them! Now your mine!
Next: Battle in the Forest
15 responses so far ↓
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Iruka (#16 Hockey Dude)
// Aug 3, 2008 at 7:11 amnice story but a bit short.
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Chaos (ANBU Elite)
// Aug 3, 2008 at 8:37 ami find it hard to believe that the best War General of the Whirlpool Country is escorted by 3 gennins and a jounin… this is not Tazuna we’re talking about
…but heeeeeeey, if in my and WS’ blog 3 genins can defeat a Jounin… i’m none the greater…
anyway, keep writing.. ‘was kinda short…
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RiVaL DeaThWiSh (Chunin Squad Leader)
// Aug 3, 2008 at 9:13 am5th..!..
Reminds Me Of Kakashi Gaiden.. Without The escorting..
Iwon’t Mind.. ^^ Good Story.. Keep It Up!..
i would Really anticipate your this series.. how the lil’ minato would turn out..
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RiVaL DeaThWiSh (Chunin Squad Leader)
// Aug 3, 2008 at 9:14 amOops.. your / this? haha… Dont mind the “your”..pwease.. hehehe..^^
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Grand_Hokage (Anbu Yellow Flash)
// Aug 3, 2008 at 10:07 amFinally im back, damn viruses messing up my computer, Had to use the MS
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Sothe (J's little uke)
// Aug 3, 2008 at 10:48 amAwesome 8th good job man, i liked it
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Yellowflash Naruto2 (Chunin Squad Leader)
// Aug 3, 2008 at 11:02 amThanks Everyone but they aren’t genin they are chunin and the General is wounded!
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ingelund (Chunin Squad Leader)
// Aug 3, 2008 at 4:20 pmNice one, hurry up with the next one
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FirelordSokka (Jonin)
// Aug 3, 2008 at 10:25 pmdang … I wonder how far they were blown away.
Great job, keep it up!
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white shinobi (ANBU Veteran)
// Aug 3, 2008 at 10:57 pmGJ yellowflash that rock ninja must be verry strong
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tailedfox (Jonin)
// Aug 4, 2008 at 3:31 amlol nice blog YellowFlash.
xD the start of the fight reminded me of the first mission Team 7 had to do, lol where zabuza comes xD. But u made Jiraiya abit 2 weak here xD. Yea it was good but abit 2 short, remember to write more xD.
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KakashiDaSixKage (Examiner)
// Aug 6, 2008 at 10:38 pmYellowflash Naruto2 excellent cliffhanger. I was on the edge off my chair with anticipation. Minato is going to need to step up and do the damn thing. Hope the next one is bangin
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SEPHIROTH13 (ANBU Elite)
// Aug 7, 2008 at 3:50 amI agree with Iruka.Good story but kinda short.Keep it up dude.We want more MINATO.Ohh and by the way welcome back Sephiroth13 we missed you
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WhiteFangofkonaha (ANBU Agent)
// Aug 7, 2008 at 6:32 amggj yellowflash good story should ahve been longer
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Lord of Sand (Newbie)
// Aug 7, 2008 at 3:39 pmso skilled and so imaginative.
keep up the good work
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