Fall of Pein, Rise of the Whirlpool Pt 6
Fall of Pein, Rise of the Whirlpool
Post Author: DarkLurker_4thLegacy
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“What the hell is he?”-Pein (A distressed look now gripping his face). He feels liquid running on his face when he wipes it away he discovers it is blood. “Could his chakra be this intense that it causes bleeding from this distance?”-Pein. Naruto hovers over his opponents his 9 tails still whipping through the air.
“It is time you experience the reign of blood, and your pain will have no pleasure, Pein!â€-Naruto. The intensity of the chakra being produced by Naruto keeps pushing Pein and his remaining bodies further and further back. Pein manges to catch a glimpse of Naruto in his newly transformed state and see all 9 tails wiping through the air.
“He chakra sets the very air on fire, making it hard to breathe!”-Pein
Suddenly the violent explosion of chakra disappears and all is calm. All that is left is a violet cloak of chakra surrounding Naruto’s body as he stands on all fours. Naruto launches one of his tails directly at Pein which he barely spots in the nick of time and barely manages to dodge it. A sinister smile lurkes around Naruto’s face. “So you saw that attack did you”-Naruto. Naruto launches a series a blinding attacks directly at Pein but he uses JP (Jiraiya Pein) and TP (Tsunade Pein) to absorbs the brunt of the attacks.
SFX-Sigh
“It seems that in order to get to the root of this problem, I’ll have to kill a few weeds. No matter they are already dead”-Naruto. Naruto opens his eyes…
“very well’-Naruto
“Kyuubi Release- Raze the skies- Flames of Hell“-Naruto.
Pein sees in horror as a living, breating wall of fire advances on his position burning everything in its path to cinders. The wall itself is so high it seems to touch to sky and consumes even it and turns the ground to liquid magma.
“They say fire is alive and consume everything it touches, given enough fire not even water can stop it.”-Naruto.
While Pein thinks how to escape the approaching flames. Unseen behind him a dark figure breaks through the ground. Naruto has use the technique as a ruse which Pein notices too late. As he and his clones turn around and see Naruto standing behind them two of Naruto’s tails plunge deep into the clones’ chest and launch them deep into the still advancing wall of flames Naruto had created earlier, and holds them there as they burn to ash. As Naruto pulls his tails out from the flames it is clear that JP and TP are no more.
With no more bodies at his disposal this fight has come down to the wire.
“Now with one blow I will avenge my sensei and Hokage. “-Naruto
“Humph you don’t think I am that much of a push over do you boy?”-Pein
“I’ll admit you are much stronger than I ever anticipated, but you don’t get to be as strong as I am without having a few cards up your sleeve”-Pein
“Ninja Ultimate Art- Six Paths to One, Now you will see the true power of a god!”-Pein
next time: The Whole World is taken to hell and only one will live!!
This is cool but I think Naruto is too evil on here but I like it’s abouot time Naruto shows his ruthless side and the jutsus are out of this world! Cool!
i agree yellowflash Naruto is going to the dark side for a bit, but he is being fueled by pent up rage and sadness for Tsunade, and Jiraiya, so i can see where he comes from! awesome job Darklurker
This is an amazing blog, great job!
that would be cool if this happens ! i would like save that chapter forever
omg that was hotttt!!!!!!
omg so cool lol
you think naruto will be able to talk while in 9 tail mode nd even control the 9 tail soon ?
yes i do gay reeeaper lol
does any one think somebody else can be able to beat pein but somebody whos on the good side
lol 9tail your a fruit with 9 tails = ]
Naruto may be a bit darker, but remember, Kyuubi is a demon. The more tails he has, the more he becomes like Kyuubi. His jutsus are AWESOME! Even Pein’s jutsu “six paths to one” sounds mean! Can’t wait till the next one! Great job!
wow naruto has amazing powers but will he able to change back the scenery and the demon cloack
well, quite impressive jutsu’s you have thar, Naruto
btw, is it just me or Pein is sadistic… i think he actually enjoyed the part when “your pain will have no pleasure, Pein”
Pein was like: “:D”
lol…
anyways, nice job DL, your cliff-hangering us also
omg this was awsome but stupid cliffhangers
AWESOME!!!! But like “We Are Hawk” said, its short.
dude Pein and pleasure so go together !!!!
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aww missed top 10…
i loved this!!! his jutsus are crraazzyyy!!!
i can’t wait for the next one!
thanks for the comments guys yes I know that Naruto is a lot darker in this one and a lot more sinister but fusing chakra with the nine-tailed-demon-fox well it seems almost sure that he’d be a bit darker more menacing kinda like SSJ4 Goku or Vegeta. Plus hey he’s here to avenge his sensei and hokage naturally he’s gonna be pissed. But I am glad you all like it. Hope to have the concluding part out to you guys soon but blog traffic is intense its like Manhattan rush hour out there,
gj dl dude the justus are badass dude
*Stands and Claps* I’m glad to say that the torch has officially been passed. It’s good to know your here to take my place DL. I hope everyone feels the same way. Someday you will surpass me my dear student, . . . someday.lol. Very nicely done.
Hai, arregato Zep-sensei. Part 7 is done and dare I say it is phenomenal.
pretty cool stuff fair play for keeping it goin 4 so long
This is a good series. how could you leave us in suspense. I am curios to see Pein’s new attack. Man is Naruto powerful. Went right through the Sannin like they were mere toys. Can’t wait for part 7
DarkLurker_4thLegacy this one was off da chain. love the fight scene and waitin for the next one. Pein is one bad ass to be so patience
I tohught it was good but I think that naruto is way to close to feeling fake. In a good fan fic you gotta make it so that it seems the character is really who he’s supposed to be I mean come on! Naruto would never allow, Not in a MILLION YEARS for the kyubbi to “kill” Jiraiya and tsunade even if they were just empty bodies. That was so out of character. Other then that awesome piece of work
Finally!!! lol, Awesome job. I’ve been waiting for the continuation for a while now…
Woohoo!!! Promotion to Examiner…. crap… its Helmet…
congrats tenkage! yeah it sucks getting Kabuto but hey what eve!!!
Great job on the post!! Well done!! Very intresting. It had a lot of action. Things are getting very hot in this series.Naruto is kicking butt. I cant wait tell the next series!!!
this blog is awesome. a granted wish.
naruto is definitely out of character here, but we don’t mind now eh? this is the closest we can get to experiencing an ultimate naruto.
damn you kishi. T_T
Great Job DL, meh posted this 2days ago but somhow my comment got removed coz of stupid laptop that was using at Uni.
Aniwaiz it was awesome, dam Naruto is pwnage xD and i thought its DE END for Pein but that guy is gonna make a combat:( well cant wait for the nxt part
Nice blog DL.So Naruto released all nine tails without transforming into Kyuubi itself.Hmm Pain sure has a hard time.
But Naruto seems evil man.
And he took out his bodies as well.Now Pain had enough and he’s going to release his final weapon yeaahhhh can’t wait.
Wohoo… Naruto kick a$$!: D
Even with his all mighty “Ninja Ultimate Art- Six Paths to One”,Pain don’t have chance against this new/powerful Naruto.
Great blog DL.
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