Post Author: WhiteFangOfKonoha
“Kakashi is the son of the genius ninja Hatake Sakumo, known as the Konoha White Fang. He had respect on the same level as the Legendary Sannin.â€â€“Yondaime Hokage
It was the culmination of the Second Great Ninja War. Allied against Konohagakure were two other great ninja villages - Sunagakure and Iwagakure. Despite that, Konoha itself looked as peaceful as ever. At the centre of the prosperous village stood the Hokage’s office.
“The Hawk Ridge guards one of the most important passes on the border between the Fire and Wind Countries. I need you to deliver an urgent message to our garrison there. It is of extreme importance that you ensure the message reaches them”, the Sandaime paused a little, puffing on his pipe. “This is an A-rank mission.â€
Fastening the scroll onto his flak jacket, Hatake Sakumo nodded curtly, speaking on behalf of his team. “It will be done, Hokage-sama.â€
The Sandaime raised a grizzled hand to his side. “Scatter!†The four-man team disappeared in a flash, the breeze in their wake ruffling the robe of the Hokage.
Sakumo signaled for his team to stop. They had traveled non-stop the entire day. The sun was setting and soon it would be too dark to travel. Team Sakumo dropped down from the branches high up on the canopy to the mossy ground of the forest. Sakumo glanced at his teammates. Since this was an A-rank mission, all of them were Jounins. He had worked closely with them on many occasions. He was particularly fond of one of them, Uchiha Fugaku. Eight years his junior, Fugaku was also a prodigy, which was not uncommon for the Uchiha Clan.
As he got into his sleeping bag, Sakumo allowed his mind to drift for a while. He thought of his son, Kakashi. Even at such young age, Kakashi showed signs of genius. He was already close to completing the Academy course. Sakumo smiled at the thought. He will be a fine shinobi one day.
The next day Team Sakumo started traveling before dawn broke and managed to cover most of the Fire Country. “In two hours time we should be at Hawk Ridge. Keep alert,†Sakumo instructed his team, indicating at a blip on a map of the region, even though all of them had already memorized the map thoroughly. His teammates nodded in agreement and continued silently.
The landscape had already begun to change. From the lush jungles of the Fire Country, the vegetation gradually thinned out until there were only sparse clumps of grass huddled together on caked soil. They begun descending into a ravine. Sakumo knew that it was the perfect terrain for enemy shinobi to ambush them, but he had no choice, for if they did not enter through the ravine, they would be easily discovered by Suna’s shinobi. Dark shadows fell across the ravine. As they sneaked into the embrace of the long shadows, all seemed quiet. Too quiet. Something is out of place here… But what? Scanning the walls of the ravine for any signs of an ambush, he found none. Nevertheless, he signaled his team to stop, indicating Fugaku to scout the area. His eyes turned red and swirled, settling into three black tomoes. Stealthily, he created a kage bunshin and crept forward in sync with his bunshin.
Without any preamble or warning, there was a flurry of flashes and whooshes, barely missing Fugaku, kicking up clouds of rusty-coloured dust. As the dust settled, Sakumo saw a wooden puppet with various lethal-looking protrusions from the main body bearing down upon Fugaku. Fugaku had blocked one of it’s sword thrusts with a kunai. The puppet was connected to a few strands of pure chakra. The other end of the glowing strands were connected to a shinobi dressed in a full-body black suit. Fugaku let out a smirk.
A dozen feet or so away, the other Fugaku clasped his hands together to form a seal. “Ninpou! Bunshin Daibakuha! (Great Clone Explosion!)†The kage bunshin near the puppet exploded in a great inferno of fire. The Sand-nin controlling the now-destroyed puppet recoiled in surprise.
“Impressive..”. a female voice remarked.
Sakumo glanced upwards sharply. A grey-haired kunoichi, already well into her middle ages, stood on a small foothold on the wall of the ravine. She had a steely and forbidding look.
Sakumo started. That’s…“Chiyo of the Red Sand,†he muttered in recognition. Founder of the Suna Puppet Corps, she was a shinobi infamous not only for her skill in using puppets for combat, but also for her lethally effective poisons, many of which she created herself.
Sakumo unsheathed his white chakra blade. “Hmmm… white hair, white chakra… you’re the White Fang of Konoha, are you not?†Her sharp eyes stared down into Sakumo’s. It was not so much a question than a statement. Pulling out a scroll, she said: “Let’s see if you deserve that reputation!†An imposing puppet with a grotesque face appeared in front of her.
With the slightest twitch of her fingers, the puppet moved with lethal grace, lunging forward with every intent to kill. Sakumo and the puppet parried and thrust each looking for an opening. As Sakumo blocked a tackle to his shoulder, Chiyo barked in a short but clear voice, “Bloom, Uekiya!†The puppet’s torso opened up like a deadly iron flower, sprouting several sharp petals and a pointed iron tip, dripping with toxin.
‘Shit!’ Sakumo leapt backwards just in time, but before he could catch his breath, the iron tip shot out like a dart, its toxic point dripping pure venom. Sakumo only had time to turn his body slightly before the dart whizzed past him, making a cut in the cloth of his shirt. The place where his shirt had been grazed fizzled a little, a faint wisp of toxic vapour wafting from the cut. ‘That was a close one,’ he thought.
But the puppet, Uekiya, had begun its attack again, changing attack patterns. Its blade met Sakumo’s chakra blade inches from his face. Suddenly, Sakumo felt a little telltale gust of wind behind him. ‘What the…’ Quickly, he made the seals for kage bunshin. A clone appeared behind his back, blocking the attacks of two black-robed puppets with its sword. Their chakra threads were connected to Chiyo’s hands.
Chiyo scowled at having her ruse* uncovered. Sakumo, panting and sweating, returned her glare. They were in a deadlock that neither of them dared to break. The sounds of Sakumo’s teammates fighting the other puppeteer permeated** the valley. Sakumo risked glancing sideways to see how the fight was going. Chiyo dropped her glance to the ground for a while. “Your opponent is me,†she said. “My son will take care of your teammates, taicho***,†Chiyo put an emphasis on the last word mockingly. ‘Son!?’ “That’s right. That is no ordinary shinobi. That is my son, Daichi of the Red Sand. As I said, your pathetic teammates will be dispatched soon enough.†Chiyo’s steely eyes focused back on Sakumo: “Meanwhile, you can hardly afford to be distracted!†She moved her delicate fingers and all three puppets began their assault again.
Uchiha Fugaku retreated a few steps, trying to evade the multiple scythes that were connected to the puppet’s body through steel ropes. “Meet my masterpiece, Kokushibyou,†Daichi announced: “Remember that name, for taht is the name of your killer!†With the last word, Kokushibyou charged towards Fugaku, scythes extended.
Fugaku threw a few kunai to deflect the trajectory of the scythes on ropes, but to no avail. Hastily, Fugaku made a few hand seals, simultaneously taking a deep breath. “Katon: Karyuudan!” (Fire Element: Fire Dragon Missile!) A fiery apparition of a dragon shot out from Fugaku’s mouth, heading towards the body of the puppet. At the last moment, a large shield unfolded in front of Kokushibyou, blocking the jutsu.
“It’s pointless!†Daichi yelled in glee. Fugaku could only evade the scythes as the ropes shot past him. “Gotcha!†The scythes, having extended past Fugaku, now turned back, the steel ropes surrounding him, making it impossible for Fugaku to escape. Fugaku struggled desperately as the ropes tightened around him. The scythes closed in on the bound Fugaku like deadly fangs.
Daichi smiled grimly as the scythes went through Fugaku, impaling him on them. “No one has ever survived that. Gai no Banshi (Scythes of Certain Death), complete!†But no screams of agony, or even moans emitted from the bundle that was Fugaku. Instead there was only a silent poof.
“What the…†Daichi scowled, untangling the ropes and scythes. “It was a kage bunshin,†a voice whispered near his ear. Daichi’s eyes widened with fear. Fugaku was holding a katana at Daichi’s back. But before Fugaku could thrust the katana into his foe, Daichi performed a Kawamiri with his puppet. The black spectre loomed over Fugaku, bristling with scythes.
Sakumo finally saw an opening in Uekiya’s defense. Not wasting the chance, Sakumo drove his fist into the body of the puppet, effectively shattering it. ‘Now’s the time!’ Leaping sideways, he rapidly performed a series of hand-seals: “Raiton: Hyakurai! (Thunder Element! Hundred Thunderclaps!)†- Sakumo grasped his left hand with his right, flowing white chakra down his hand. There was a great sound, like hundreds of thunderclaps. As the air rumbled, he swept his hand in the direction of Chiyo and the other two puppets. As the sound-wave travelled, the ground trembled, and a mini-sandstorm of sorts was created. The two puppets and Chiyo were hit by the full force of the jutsu.
When the dust cleared, Chiyo was nowhere in sight. Glancing in the direction of Fugaku, he saw a large black puppet looming over him, clearly closing in for the kill. ‘Shit! This is bad!’ Sakumo concentrated his chakra, infusing his entire body with Lightning chakra. Feeling his body become extremely fast, he dashed towards Chiyo’s son, chakra blade glinting. Daichi barely had time to notice Sakumo before he sunk his blade to the hilt into Daichi’s chest.
Diachi wore a look of disbelief on his face. “H-how… is this the power of the White Fang!?†He gave a small spasm, and his head droped. Blood trickled down from Daichi’s mouth onto the dirt, forming a little stream. “It’s over,†Sakumo whispered, slowly extracting his bloody katana.
( P.S This is an idea of an old friend of mine. I told him to e-mail it to me, so I can post. I can’t take all the credit. P.S.S I like Pie P.S.S.S Happy Independence Day )
46 responses so far ↓
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We Are Hawk (Chunin)
// Jul 4, 2008 at 7:10 amthis is a good blog and is a good explantion of how chiyo son died
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We Are Hawk (Chunin)
// Jul 4, 2008 at 7:12 amp.s Happy Independence Day
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white shinobi (ANBU Veteran)
// Jul 4, 2008 at 7:30 amhappy Independence Day
gj wfk i like it when does sakumo kill sasori’s mother?
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Sothe (J's little uke)
// Jul 4, 2008 at 7:47 amhappy independence day shannaro! awesome post WFK. The white fang rulez,
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silver_uchiha (Tsunami-hime)
// Jul 4, 2008 at 7:48 am@ WF congratulations ! This a good piece of fiction to fill the gaph in Kishi tale. Like you I have the feeling that Fugaku really was a team mate of Kakashi’s father, or friends or something. I feel like there must be a reason for the Uchiha leader to allow Kakasi to go on with Obito’s sharingam.
Keep Going !!
@ USA citizens Happy 4 of July!!
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Chaos (ANBU Elite)
// Jul 4, 2008 at 8:04 amI’ll start with “Happy Independence Day U.S.A. ! ”
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Very Impressive WFK … very …actually very well written, by you and your friend…
P.S… i like pie too
P.S.S. … i liek muffins…
P.S.S.S. …and mudkipz
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Chaos (ANBU Elite)
// Jul 4, 2008 at 8:10 amP.S.S.S.S.
You should invite that friend of yours to the site… it’s always nice to meet new people… with creative skills
… and i liked the way you incorporated Chiyo and Daichi Of The Sand in the story … it does in fact kinda’ make sense …
..if Kishi’s gonna do a “White Fang of Konoha Gaiden” Arc… i’m sure it would involve most of this that you’ve posted here
Cheers !
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Sothe (J's little uke)
// Jul 4, 2008 at 8:56 amPIE?! i do like pie….yeah invite zee friend! anyone with cool ideas should join.
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WhiteFangofkonaha (ANBU Agent)
// Jul 4, 2008 at 9:14 amty guys i’ve just wanna show how i think how awesome the wfk is and there will be a follow a psot
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WhiteFangofkonaha (ANBU Agent)
// Jul 4, 2008 at 9:21 ampost*
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eli987 (Examiner)
// Jul 4, 2008 at 9:53 amHappy Independence Day!
Very good idea and it makes lot of sense. That friend of yours really has a good ideas.
Good job WFK!
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SEPHIROTH13 (ANBU Elite)
// Jul 4, 2008 at 11:44 amReally great work WFOK!!Very impresive.
It seems that you and your friens worked hard for this.Very well written.
WF is now in a higher place in my mind.Really good job.Bravo!!!
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Yellowflash Naruto2 (Chunin Squad Leader)
// Jul 4, 2008 at 11:54 amWow this post is so kool now we get to read about the white Fang, Awesome! But I thought Chiyo was at home with Sasori when the White fang killed his father! Well must have gotten it wrong! But still cool!
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Mister_Sensei (Genin)
// Jul 4, 2008 at 11:58 amYellowFlash Naruto2, I lost to you in becoming genin. Heck, all I can say that this fiction novel piece was an awesome. I think Kishi needs to take into account this and publish it with the proper credit to the author.
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DarkLurker_4thLegacy (Team Shannaro!!!)
// Jul 4, 2008 at 12:31 pmdamn 11th again gj WFK
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DarkLurker_4thLegacy (Team Shannaro!!!)
// Jul 4, 2008 at 12:36 pmthe you Shannaro guys are an imaginative lot i like that keep this up WFK.
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Sothe (J's little uke)
// Jul 4, 2008 at 12:50 pma follow up? sounds awesome! cant wait man, gj again! i love the fan fiction these days you other guys make me wanna step up my game!
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Pleasure and Pein (Jonin)
// Jul 4, 2008 at 1:00 pmNicely done WFK…this was a good blog…and i like the idea, but i believe chiyo stayed home with Sasori when daichi and his wife were killed, because she got note of it back in Suna…but it is a fun blog and i like it. i want more insight into the WFK befiore Kakashi dies! I LOVE PIE!!!!
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DarkLurker_4thLegacy (Team Shannaro!!!)
// Jul 4, 2008 at 1:01 pmYOw sorry I had to read this again it was too intense excekkent writting skill s for both of you. MAn is your friend in the village you should invite him/her. Excellent piece again.
Bad manners Happy Independence you guys in the US .
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haruto (Chunin)
// Jul 4, 2008 at 1:11 pmi wouldnt call america independant, u ask me ur being smarty dictated like all off us bt who am i to say, nyway nice blog
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Pleasure and Pein (Jonin)
// Jul 4, 2008 at 1:23 pmno we are independent!!!
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NSS7 (Sanin)
// Jul 4, 2008 at 2:44 pmthis post is interesting and it gives me a good idea of what white fang is like and i thought the pic of what white fang face look like and i thought it looked weird
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Iruka (#16 Hockey Dude)
// Jul 4, 2008 at 3:52 pmvery creative. I like how you tied White Fang to Chiyo and explained the death of her son and father of Sasori. Good job filling in the void.
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WhiteFangofkonaha (ANBU Agent)
// Jul 4, 2008 at 5:42 pmguys ty for the good comments i felt like the link between chiyo and the white fang had to be filled
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WhiteFangofkonaha (ANBU Agent)
// Jul 4, 2008 at 5:43 pmwe’re shooting like bazooka like fireworks over sooooooooooooo Xd im not gonan be on much today
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FirelordSokka (Jonin)
// Jul 4, 2008 at 10:42 pmAwesome job man! You always more about the Sannin and the Kages, but there are oter noth-worthy ninjas out there. Sakumo I believe is one of them. Is there gonna be a part 2?
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tailedfox (Jonin)
// Jul 5, 2008 at 2:03 amAwesome Job WFK and ur friend.
It was good reading something awesome bout White Fang of Konaha.
Keep it up guys
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Grand_Hokage (Anbu Yellow Flash)
// Jul 5, 2008 at 3:20 amahaaaaaaa great post wfk, i also that your spelling has also improved or at least i think it has anyway keep on doing your thing man. Man im finally back
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FÅ«jin9 (Chunin)
// Jul 5, 2008 at 4:25 amgreat imagination WFK. btw, i have this crazy idea that Sakumo must have fangs, hence the name. And Kakashi must have white fangs too, and that must be what he’s hiding in his mask. hehe.
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FÅ«jin9 (Chunin)
// Jul 5, 2008 at 4:28 amthe “thousand thunderclaps” is unlikely though since we were told that Chidori is Kakashi’s original jutsu. i still enjoyed it though.
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white shinobi (ANBU Veteran)
// Jul 5, 2008 at 4:55 amFÅ«jin9 wfk didn’t say it was chidori and chidori is “a thousand birds” not “a thousand thunderclaps”
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Pleasure and Pein (Jonin)
// Jul 5, 2008 at 6:19 amyeah Chidori is Kakashi’s original…but the lightning element could be in the blood of the Hatake’s…I need to know more… on all the characters that they mention! they need to bring up yondaime and naruto’s mom!
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WhiteFangofkonaha (ANBU Agent)
// Jul 5, 2008 at 6:32 amto answer ur question yes there will be a part 2 figuring out how minato knew so much about sakumo tahnks it really has gh the reason i came with the thunder clap is i was playing the hulk he does this move called sonic boom which is liek that
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WhiteFangofkonaha (ANBU Agent)
// Jul 5, 2008 at 6:34 amand the thunder clap justu is when he focuses his white charka to both his hands and claps like a hundred hand claps
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KakashiDaSixKage (Examiner)
// Jul 5, 2008 at 4:52 pmWhiteFangOfKonoha awesome blog I alway love a history lesson. It would be nice if they do a side story on Hatake Sakumo. Just a thought
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Sand Swordsmen (Genin)
// Jul 5, 2008 at 9:18 pmDam I like this alot. I couldnt believe what happened wih all that. Man! That thunder element Jutsu must be hereditary. awesome post white fang loved it
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tailedfox (Jonin)
// Jul 5, 2008 at 9:48 pmYep nice job bro.
Hopefully u add some stuff about Minato in ur nxt part.
Man somone gotta write somthin like “Adventrure of Yellow Flash” xD
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eighthHokage (Jonin)
// Jul 6, 2008 at 11:37 amFinally something about ninja where even Sanin feared him.Even we don’t know much about him he was great ninja.If this blog is going to become a series I cant wait for part when he is on that mission where instead to finish mission he decide to save friend and with that act whole village reject him.Excellent post WFK and congrats on your imagination
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tailedfox (Jonin)
// Jul 7, 2008 at 4:35 amYea that would be awesome but dont think kishi will bring up somthin new atm or who noes maybe a filler
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nine@tailed@girl (Jonin)
// Jul 7, 2008 at 6:46 pmAWSOME WHITEY!!!! KEEP IT UP!!!!
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Tenkage (Chunin Squad Leader)
// Jul 7, 2008 at 7:01 pmDamn, thought I already commented on this. GJ… whitey.
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naruto abarai (Chunin Squad Leader)
// Jul 8, 2008 at 6:10 amnice very interesting. but you should tell your friend that the way he used the shit made it sound comical
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naruto abarai (Chunin Squad Leader)
// Jul 8, 2008 at 6:11 amoops, the way he used the word shit made it sound comical
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Sharingansasuke (Chunin Squad Leader)
// Jul 8, 2008 at 12:37 pmthis has 2 b one of the best ive evr seen
this reely shows and makes u thk of wat powers white fang cood hav had
thunder to lightning
Sakumo to Kakashi
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WhiteFangofkonaha (ANBU Agent)
// Jul 10, 2008 at 9:13 amtenkage never call me that again
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WhiteFangofkonaha (ANBU Agent)
// Jul 10, 2008 at 2:42 pmand fujin its not a thosand handcalps its a hundred
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