Fall of Pein, Rise of the Whirlpool Pt5
Part 1 | Part 2 | Part 3 | Part 4
Posted By DarkLurker
Super Spectacular Pic by Guruku
Descent into Darkness….the Blood Kekkei Genkei
“I wonder boy, do you have what it takes to beat these two and me as well HAHAHAHAHAHA!â€-Pein.
“It does seem that you have overreached coming here by yourself”-Pein
Naruto stares on with a look of concern on his face. “Shit, I didn’t expect this, this complicates things… sigh”-Naruto
A wide smirk come across Naruto’s face…”Nani!”, What the hell are you laughing about!”- Pein
“You, I’m laughing at you, you self righteous pin-cushion!” Naruto erupts into laughter.
“He’s gone mad!, no matter this farce is OVERRRRRR!”-Pein
All three launch a full frontal assault on Naruto, Naruto’s remaining clones rush in to save him but with the sanin’s full abilities under Pein’s full control the three prove to be too much for the clones and all are defeated. Naruto pauses as he receives the information that was collected in each clone but unfortunately he gets their exhaustion as well. Pein sees an advantage and takes it and both Tsunade-Pein (TP) and Jariya-Pein (JP) score direct hits on Naruto’s now weakened body. As he flies through the air he thinks that this is getting bad when above him TP appears and a sweeping kick to his stomach. As he rockets to the ground he is met by another swift kick from JP. Before Naruto can finish skipping across the ground like a rag doll he is kicked a third time this time by Pein himself.
Naruto is laying face down near the edge of a puddle left by the heavy rains before. “What didn’t you promise to kill me boy? Didn’t you vow to avenge your friends? I guess your word is nothing…is it boy?!”- Pein. Inside Naruto he is again on a barren landscape, he wonders what great battle took place to cause such destruction, he hears the voices of his sensei and the hokage: “if this is all your capable of Naruto, you’ll never be able to protect your friends or get Sasuke back”-voices.
He has a flash back to when he was training with Jariya and fell and Jariya keeps yelling at him to get up. “What kinda ninja are you? Will you give up just because the road gets hard? Will you run away because you must make a difficult choice? You must constantly push yourself to get to the next level or you will not survive?” – Jariya flashback.
Naruto’s eyes pop back open just as Pein was about to deliver a finishing blow. He flips out of the way and stands to his feet. “SSS…So…Sorry if I fell asleep on you just now, the whole pace of this fight is putting me to sleep!!! But I’m awake now!”- Naruto. Pein is pissed but all he does is grit his teeth together. “So there’s more fight in you huh?!”- Pein. “I guess I’ll have to kick the crap out of you some more”-Pein. Naruto mutters something to himself and then totally disappears from sight. He reappears beside TP but when she tries to hit him he vanishes again. “They tell me that your eyes have controls over all the known elements in ninjutsu. What about those that are not of this world? Those controlled by demons and tailed beasts”-Naruto. “Can you use those otherworldly powers?”- Naruto
As the rest of the Konoha 7 race to backup their comrade the clone suddenly shouts to everyone to stop.
“Nani!”- Ino.
The clone clutches his chest and coughs up a dark substance looking like blood. “This is no longer a fight we can join without…”-Clone.
Yamato looks on ominously thinking that the fox has taken over and Naruto has transformed
“Without what!”-Sakura
“What is that!”-Neji
“What! What do you see Neji!- Shikamaru
“Everything is dying! The entire forest before us is dead. it’s like a whole different land”-Neji
“It is the true power of Naruto’s Kekkei Genkei, “Scorched Earth, Kingdom of Blood”- Clone
“For him to have summoned it in the battle, he must be fighting a hard one… if we go any closer to that village you all may die just by being there”-Clone
“Tell us about this power”-Yamato.
“Well Naruto was able to perfect and surpass his father’s sealing technique…”- Clone
“He surpassed the 4th’s technique”- Yamato
“NANI”- So the 4th is Naruto’s Father huh?!”- Shikamaru and Kiba
“But in surpassing it he summoned the Kingdom of Blood, a savage and dark land where everything is simply dead; Since Naruto has used “that jutsu” we all would be in danger and just get in the way”- Clone
Back at the battle 9 distinct violet colored tails of raw chakra whip violently around Naruto the violet color indicates the merger of both Naruto’s chakra and the foxes. “I never thought I’d have to use these techniques on you but you’ve left me very little choice.”-Naruto. The ground collapses in a huge crater under the weight of his chakra, but Naruto is floating over the crater.
“What the hell is he!”-Pein (A distressed look now gripping his face). He feels liquid running on his face when he wipes it away he discovers it is blood. “Could his chakra be this intense that it causes bleeding from this distance”-Pein. Naruto hovers over his opponents his 9 tails still whipping through the air. “It is time you experience the reign of blood, and your pain will have no pleasure, Pein!”-Naruto.
Enjoy guys!!! I know you are thirsty for more!
Thanks again for the pic Guruku.
HAHAHA FIRST!!!!!!!!!!
Oh man so intense! And what a terrible Kekkei Genkai. I say terrible, because of the effect, not the actual power. I wonder though, will the cost be the same as the fourth’s (meaning death)?
Awesome job!
this was good..
Dmmmmmmmmmmmmn this is good man
no im sure it wouldnt have a bad effect because its a kekkei genkei not a regular jutsu even if it did it wouldnt be severe
Yoyo nothing less of what i expected whats with all the cliffhangers, its like your becoming the apprentice of Kishimoto at doing these cliffhangers, i must say i seemed to be nore and more drawed in with each part. Great Job DL. Plus dont forget the line of the day “It is time you experience the reign of blood, and your pain will have no pleasure, Pein!â€
i wish the naruto would have powers like that in the anime
Oh yh by the way does this ability of Naruto harm him in anyway like most of jis other abilities if so its not fair DL you gotaa change it man. loooooool
Im with you there gr8test_hokage
@ gr8est_hokage: It’s a “power of Naruto’s Kekkei Genkai”, not the actual Kekkei Genkai. Which means there are consequences. Like the Mangekyu(?) Sharingan. The Sharingan is the Kekkei Genkai, the ability to copy jutsus is a power of it. The MS surpasses the basic Sharingan, but use it too much and the consequence is going blind. That’s kinda severe I think. Besides, the “Scorched Earth, Kingdom of Blood” is a perfection of the Fourth’s Sealing Jutsu, which unfortunately resulted in death.
I hope that Naruto’s new technique can be countered by Kyuubi’s healing power. Cause then Naruto could basically be immortal!
So, that ruled. Naruto kicks ass there, maybe the manga sould take notice.
Naruto at his full capicity. He should be able to defeat Pein and his sannin pupppets. Man I can’t wait to hear the rest of the story.
where are my manners, Gj DL and guruku!
DarkLurker awesome with this one. The Kingdom of Blood what a hellish move. Naruto you devil you. Keep up the good work D, can’t wait for the next one
I’m wondering if Naruto defeat Pein do Tsunada and Jiraiya turn back to normal and live(that would be freaky), turn back to normal and die(what touching scene that would be) or just die as Pein B$tches ???!!?!?!?(that would be just wrong) We would have to wait and see
Awww i think they would deserve to rest im peace personally, they’ve gone out in style and they need to be put to rest!
8th… i suppose… very intense… and very well written … i am indeed thirsty for more …
… now Pein is gonna feel real Pain
i very much enjoy the series …
Great Job DL !!!
…and as always… great pics, Guruku
Gr8 job guys. Keep it up, but stop with the cliffhangers..u r killin me! Y in the world can’t Naruto actually be this awesome?
I thought the sealing abilty of Minato had was more about the Seal he uses to teleport, not the Shinigami Summoning Seal. Great story btw DL!
GJ DL i can’t wait for the next one
Wow! This is great you’ve made Naruto super strong, I can’t wait for the next one hurry up and lpease write more!LOL
Yea… I liked this story too… So, I added the picture in. =D Good job w/ the story writing DL.!
AWESOME!!!!!!
I gotta say that that was the greatest part of this series. I never would have thought that naruto could improve that much. I have to hand it to the author this was a great piece of work. I hope there will be more just as good as this one.
Dude OMG I WAS LITERALLY GOING CRAZY MY EYE IS TWITCHING
WWWOOOOWWWW.Man that was totoly great.Super cool.A demon like jutsu?The tails in the game?Pein is bleeding?Jezz.
Great job, you guys took for ever but great job!
Damn thats wat im talking bout!!!!!!!!
Awesome Job DL and nice pic guru.
Man i enjoy reading ur post than reading the real manga seriously. I mean Naruto is super awesom here, KINGDOM OF BLOOD FTW!!
Cant wait for the nxt part, but plz dont make us wait 2 long hehe.
Woah im a Genin now
awesome
WOW dl this was great! good job…can’t wait for the next one!
really good blog and i mean relly good one oof my favorite blogs
thanks for this blog. i really enjoyed it. the idea of Naruto’s chakra combining with the Kyuubi’s chakra to form a deadly combination…that’s interesting. keep it up!
Man sorry that I took so long to release circumstances I try not to have the next one so long….to those who are asking no it is not as dangerous as the wind release rasengan well not in the short term but like the Sharingan there is a cost. Its not a trait he activates for just any and anyone.
im glad you all loved it, its an inspiration to write more and really get more into my imagination thank you ALL>
And for those who have asked about his the forths teleportation read Psrt 2 wen the clones NAruto created reached the Rain Village way ahead of the rest of the team and you’ll see much of his new speed comes out.
Thanks again for showing your love for the series.
OMG!!!! That was AWSOME. It was soooo good that it blow my mine. It was out of this world. Very intrestiong amd amuseing. Great job on the post DL. Dont think i forgot about you Guruku, let me say like always, those was some sick pic. WOWHOW way to go!!^_^ We should have compatition; who can make the best post and who ever wins could have,”post king” for a title. What do you think?^_^
But, we already know I’m the post King, and DL is my aprentice. lol.
I mean, but still. That would be cool and fun. A little compatition want hurt anybody.
yes oh wise Zep-sensei. I think it’s a worthy idea SN but I leave such matter for the the Shannaro 20 (I know its not 20 of you but it sounds cool ok). I’m just glad that I was able to contribute to the villages overall growth and entertainment.
one more, It looks to be good, but I think naruto wouldn’t use the kyubii unless he had compleat control…
I second that Shadow ninja, but I have to respectfully disagree with Zep, If I had to vote for someone besides myself it would probably be Guruku or Sothe
Awesome Job DL,
Can u do us a favour? hehe
Like lets say can u plz release ur nxt parts between the release of real manga, wat i mean is that real manga comes out on Thursdays/fridays so can u release urs around mondays or somtin like that.
LOl
Awesome blog DarkLurker .I just read all 5 part of :” Fall of Pein, Rise of the Whirlpool” and I must say that I’m amased with both- story and your writing skills. Can’t wait for next part.Keep up the good work.
P.S.I’m glad to see that Naruto finally become strong,smart and even cool. I love it
I noe xD
wish he was that strong in real manga.
damn kishi is keeping naruto weak till the last moment? maybe he got confused between the main charc, like instead of naruto he made sasuke super strong
im sure, we will see a stronger naruto soon.
but i dont think he will have a lot of jutsus though. remember jiraiya and orochimaru’s conversation? Orochimaru believes the ultimate ninja is someone who have mastered all the jutsus in the world whereas Jiraiya believes that a great shinobi doesn’t have to have a lot of jutsus, but he should be someone who never gives up. Jiraiya’s definition of course fits naruto perfectly.
I believe Naruto will have just a few jutsus, but very very powerful jutsus. that’s where the kyuubi power will come to play. im wondering what type of jutsus kishi will give Naruto.
I think that the ultimate ninja could do fine with four mabey five main jutsu (one long, mid, and short range, one summoning, and one elemental chakra)
Fujin9 yea thats true wat Jiraiya said fits naruto but also Jiraiya was similar to Naruto and he got pwned by Pein and now Naruto has to learn reli kool jutsu coz there is Pein, Sasuke and even stronger one Madara. I mean with all this stuff he has is nothing atm, his new jutsu Rasenshuriken is awesome but i dont think that wil work on madara as he can teleport like he did wen naruto attacked him wit rasengan
Hey i have been on vacation, BUT PAIN IS ALWAYS PLEASURE!!! this is an awesome series!
welcome back P&P
Welcome Bak B&P
Lol while u wer gone i registered in academy hehe
Naruto is ROCKS
thanks guys! i gotta catch up white shinobi there was a time when we were equal in Rank!!! help me i’m naruto’in it up here!!!
pleasure and pein welcome back! your falling behind
guruku, how do you get these images?! you must seriously be the god of google.
welcome back PnP thanks for the compliment. Hope you had a great vacation.
woot awesome job again.
Lol i read it again xD
com on Dl post the next one and plz try to make it longer
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