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SHANNARO!!! MANGA CHAPTER 5: “A Mission Without The Sensei”

27 June 2008 45 Comments


Muffin Masters: white shinobi & chaos
Couch potato: Guruku

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Not much time has passed since the Academy Students became Genins… not much time has passed since FirelordSokka returned… is it too much for the Shannaro Genins to handle? We shall wait and see…

::Genkage’s Office::

Next afternoon… Grand_Hokage, Silver-Uchiha, and Iruka came here thinking they were going on a mission…
Silver_Uchiha: Where is Sensei?
Bob-sama: I have assembled a Jounin Elite Team to go and track down FirelordSokka… or at least get some information on his whereabouts…
Iruka:
So what are we doing here? Our sensei isn’t here… there are no missions…
Bob-sama:
Missions? Oh, well, i do have missions… unfortunately only C rank missions and above…
Grand_Hokage:
Finally, a C-Rank mission! Please send us! Please, old man…
Bob-sama: (FX:sigh)
…old man…? … Well, i can’t send you on a C rank mission unless you can find a Jounin available… a Jounin with teaching experience… I’m afraid I’ve pretty much dispatched most of the Jounins.
Iruka:
I saw Sephiroth-Sensei today… does he have a mission?
Bob-sama:
Well, no… but… lately… he’s been acting strange… suddenly, i feel i can’t trust anybody… everybody is going for their own interest… FirelordSokka has breached the borders easily… he must’ve had inside support though… trust… what must i do to ensure the safety of my people…? … anyways, Sephiroth has his own Team to worry about…
Grand_Hokage:
You can trust me, old man!! I will become Genkage one day… just like you!
Silver_Uchiha:
…do you know how far you must go until you can actually be selected for Genkage? You are a fool to think that someone so incompetent as yourself will ever reach Chunin status… let alone Genkage
Grand_Hokage:
SAY WHAT??? Incompetent… I didn’t see you lifting a finger when we were attacked by FirelordSokka!!!
Iruka: SHUT UP!!! We were all incapable of defending ourselves…
just then, someone knocks at the door, it’s Team Sephiroth….

Sephiroth: Hello, GenKage-sama… my team was eager to know if you have any missions for us…
Bob-sama: Well, as a matter of fact, I do… you see these three genins here? I want you to infiltrate and take down the Southern Akasumi Hideout … free the merchants that are held as prisoners… and of course succesfully return back to Shannaro.
Sephiroth: … seems easy enough for the Genin’s… the Akasumi are just a bunch of drunkard bandits…
Silver_Uchiha: A 7 ninja team?
Bob-sama: The more the numbers, the more difficult for them to fight you….
Sephiroth: Enough talk… this is all I wanted to know… Teams, come with me!

…later near the Akasumi perimeter…

Sephiroth: Ok, my team has enough experience to fight on it’s own, so they will eliminate the interior targets. I will make my way through, stealth if necessary, to the top of the building, then make my way to the place where the prisoners are being kept. Team 1, you eliminate the outside targets… or anyone that can be a danger to the succes of our mission… also observe anything that can be suspicious and use this device to contact me if something poses a threat to our mission… which i doubt… the Akasumi aren’t quite the smartest crooks you’ll find around… Ok, you get the plan… move out!

Grand_Hokage: I think we’ve been screwed out of our mission… we’re just gonna stay here and watch?
Silver_Uchiha: Shut up already… Sephiroth sensei knows what he’s doing
Grand_Hokage: … I know what he’s doing too, he’s leaving us here… than the succes of the mission will be his, not ours!
Iruka: Shut up… I’m sick and tired of you two whining all the time!
Silver_Uchiha: Wait, what’s that… do you hear something?
Iruka: Look up there… who’s that guy?
Grand_Hokage: What is he writing?

The Unknown person is sitting on the roof of an adjacent building to the Akasumi hideout… he is writing something…

Iruka: Let’s take a closer look…
Grand_Hokage shouts : HEY!!! YOU ON THE ROOFTOP!!! WHO ARE YOU??!?!!
Silver_Uchiha : You damn fool! Don’t you think that the noise will attract the bandits to our whereabouts

Unknown Person : YO! What’s up kids? What are you doing here at this late hour ?
Iruka: I could ask you the same thing….
Unknown Person: ::jumps down:: WELL, since you want to know….. I AM J-SAMA, GENERAL OF THE SHANNARO HENTAI ARMY,…also writer of “Hentai Weekly” Magazine ….
Grand_Hokage: Who?
J-sama : Whattdaya mean who??? I am famous throughout the land! A fierce warrior! a…
Iruka: Hentai huh? You’re a perv?
J-sama: um… uuuuuhhhh… well… um
SIlver_Uchiha: Yea, you are…
J-sama: I don’t know what you are talking about… heh… really…my work is only for professionals such as me!
Iruka: Professional Pervs?
J-sama : You kids are too young to understand even the principle of my work!
Grand_Hokage: The principle of being a perv?
J-sama: SHUT UP!!! You’re Annoying!!! I could kill you without even moving!
Silver_Uchiha: What’s that scroll behind you?
J-sama: Nothing….just…part of my search…kukuku
Grand_Hokage: No, the other one.
J-sama: Oh, heh… that one… those are scrolls that i’ve borrowed from the Shannaro Main Library… some jutsu’s you wouldn’t understand…
Grand_Hokage: I can understand… let me see ::takes the scroll::.
Iruka: The scroll says something about the Gofuuungan?
Silver_Uchiha: Gofuuungan? That’s the same kekkai genkkai sensei has… the same they all have…
J-sama: Sensei ? You are ninja’s?
Grand_Hokage: Yes, Shannaro Genin Team 1
J-sama: heh….Genins? now that’s quite weak… I didn’t expect you to value my work… now I see why, you’re just insignificant genins!
Iruka: Insignificant?
Silver_Uchiha: Is that Gofuuunton : Gofuuunriudan? That is the same jutsu FirelordSokka used on sensei!
J-sama: Huh?… FirelordSokka? ::Pondering::I heard he is back…

Before J-sama could finish his thought half of the Akasumi Building explodes (FX:BOOOM!!!)

J-sama: Get Down On The Ground NOW!!
Grand_Hokage: What is that??
J-sama: Let’s see what’s going on.

The Genins and J-sama go through the burning rubble, and enter the left side of the building…

Iruka: The building is in flames… we must find Team Sephiroth…
J-sama: There’s no way they could survive an explosion of such a magnitude…
Silver_Uchiha: We must find them… this is a desperate situation!!!
Iruka: Tell us what to do? Give us something to do, damnit!
J-sama: I could TEMPORARILY give you the Gofuuungan, so you can find them by their traces of chakra… but i’m not sure you are ready… and you will not be able to use it at it’s full potential. You have to do your own Gofuuungan to be able to use it permanently and at it’s full potential.
Silvert_Uchiha: Temporary? When will it go off?
Iruka: I don’t care… give us the Gofuuungan
Grand_Hokage: I am ready, just give me that Gofuuungan…
J-sama: ::Hesitates:: …Erm… fine… gather chakra in your eyes… than do all the hand seals 5 times, in the same order… and shut up, or you’ll have to do it all over again!
….60 handseals (each) later…..
Grand_Hokage: IT HURTS!
J-sama: Don’t open your eyes yet…..not until the chakra disperses…
Silver_Uchiha: IT HURTS JUST LIKE MY EYES ARE BEING RIPPED OUT!!!
J-sama: The Temporary Gofuuungan can be done only once…..in your whole lifetime….use it carefully….use it now… it will turn off in a week or so… then it is up to you if you’ll want to PERMANENTLY activate the Gofuuungan… steadily… open your eyes…

*J-sama disappears in the darkness*

Grand_Hokage: Huh? Where did he go?
Iruka: It doesn’t matter, let’s find Team Sephiroth!!!
Silver_Uchiha: I can see small traces of chakra from that big hallway…

The Genins can hear the screams of help from Team Sephiroth… they are trapped under burning wood… Silver_Uchiha grabs them out of the burning rubble…

Iruka: Where is Sephiroth-sensei?
Ikamuzu Oturan : I don’t know, he went to the rooftop on his own…
Anbu_Quazzy : We were fighting some powerful ninja’s… they weren’t Akasumi bandits, that i know for sure… we barely managed to defend from them… we’re actually lucky the building exploded.
Silver_Uchiha: Lets get to the rooftop!!!

On the Rooftop they see Sephiroth fighting someone who seems to be the leader of the Akasumi… but Akasumi aren’t ninja’s… this is a very difficult situation.

Iruka: There he is!!! Let’s go!!

…but then more rogue ninja’s cut their way…Team 1 use some Taijutsu and Ninjutsu, but it isn’t sufficient to beat them

Iruka: I’m at my limit…
Silver_Uchiha: Me too
Grand_Hokage: We don’t have a choice… GOFUUUNGAN!!!!

to be continued…

45 Comments »

  • ZabuzatheGREAT said:

    first!!!!!

  • J-sama said:

    2nd?

  • white shinobi (author) said:

    3th

  • J-sama said:

    Yay! My alter-ego’s in there! And FYI, it’s ‘Hentai Monthly’…
    I don’t get this Gofuuungan thing.. If it’s supposed to be a Kekkei Genkai, how come everybody can have it? Is it some kinda Shannaro-village-kekkei-genkai?

  • white shinobi (author) said:

    its a village kekkai genkai the village has been alone for manny years so there are only fullblood shannaroians

  • ZabuzatheGREAT said:

    good one guys can’t wait for the next one……. I hate cliffhangers

  • Shadow Ninja said:

    Excellent. Man these storys just gets better and better.WOWHOW! I cant wait for the next one too; that something we can all agree on.^_^ Guruku, like always great job on the pics, i loved them. Storys like these, i hope they NEVER END!!

  • Sand Swordsmen said:

    Oh man this was a great chapter. I like how they were able to temporarily release their kekkai genkai. Man and the whole J-sama thing is so familiar for some reason(hmm maybe…) well anyways great post and I hope to see more of this great story

  • Sand Swordsmen said:

    YYYYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I’M NOT A NEWBIE NO MORE!!!!!!
    I’m A ROOKIE! YAY

  • silver_uchiha said:

    GJ WS and C !!
    Cool. I lekie the new characters, is funny to see our resident pervert taking his place as a star. You are working hard for this. So a big star for u guys

  • Shadow Ninja said:

    Congrats Sans Swordsmen, it will only get harder from here. I’m proud^_^ but dont forget to make friends and have FUN!! WOWHOW.^_^

  • WhiteFangofkonaha said:

    sweet gj white shinobi and chaos

  • white shinobi (author) said:

    @ evyone; thanks for the good comments

    guruku thanks for the editting man

  • Iruka said:

    This series is getting good. Who is going to become J’s deciple. I bet someone becomes Firelord Sokka’s desiple and somehow Nef or Lady will show up in the future. And somehow someone becomes her pupil I think I see a reoccurring theme happpening. J show’s up as a pwoerful ninja just like Ero Sannin and Firelord Sokka is powerful and a village enemy just like Orochi. Takiking lessons from Kishi. Nice

  • white shinobi (author) said:

    damn you iruka you read my mind in some of those things i’m not telling wich ones otherwise chaos will kill me

  • SEPHIROTH13 said:

    Great job guys.Well done.Hmmm the Hokage does not trust me any more?Kukuku…i don’t blame him.

    So an C-rank mission for the lil genins and their first experience with their kekkai genkai.So the pathetic bandints weren’t so pathetic after all…What you have in your sick minds guy?

  • NSS7 said:

    nice post

  • white shinobi (author) said:

    seph that’s called a genkage not hokage

  • NarutoElitNin said:

    this seres are geting better and beter wish i could join the storyline to but im dont think im inportant enought

  • FirelordSokka said:

    Awesome job once again!

    While I can see some resemblences between me and Orochimaru, I see myself more like Sora from the dotHack anime. (He’s the guy that was after Tsukasa, Bear, and Mimiru). A guy that likes to talk trash, but has the ability to back it up. Just an all-around punk. lol.

    This chapter was well done, just like the rest. Keep it up guys! Can’t wait for the next one!

  • sharingan leader said:

    yay!!!!! i like the blog guys!!!!! now i wonder who is the guy sepiroth was fighting?? kukukukuku now am i guna be in the next one????

  • KakashiDaSixKage said:

    Like alway white shinobi & chaos you keep takin it to the next level. Awesome job and great cliffhanger Kishi would be proud. Can’t wait to see what install for us next. Thanks guys!!! Keep up the good work

  • Yellowflash Naruto2 said:

    This is a cool post, I wish I could read what happened next! I wonder what abilities the goufuugan have.

  • We Are Hawk said:

    i will be in it next woo hoo

  • Chaos said:

    :D thnx for the comments guys
    well… i think some people are confused still … i should start a SHANNAROPEDIA :D
    …the temporary Gofuungan will have some temporary side effects … but i can’t say more

  • Chaos said:

    ….i’ll never stop thanking Guruku for helping us out … thanks man… :D
    … sorry for being troublesome…

  • Grand_Hokage said:

    hEY this chapter was great man im expecting more like this really dude. It was the best so far, im getting in some action and all sorts. By the way i thought Septhiroth was a bad guy or at least would turn into one. Anyway good job white Shinobi and Chaos. Im loooking forward to the next chapter

  • Grand_Hokage said:

    Also i almost for forgot i managed to temprorarily activate GOFUUUNGAN, Oh how cool is that cant wait thanks for giving me such a nice part guys

  • white shinobi (author) said:

    @ SL you are in the next one i prommise

    @ NarutoElitNin you can join just ask me or chaos

  • Naruto Uzumaki said:

    That was….AWSOME LOL anyway it was a good blog. keep up the good work

  • eli987 said:

    Great job white shinobi and Chaos! This is really interesting. It’s good as real Naruto. I can’t wait to see next part. Keep up the good work!

  • Naruto Uzumaki said:

    Shannaro rox. Like b4 keep up the good wurk. It was a good blog ws

  • Naruto Uzumaki said:

    and Chaos

  • Sothe said:

    dude i LOVE that link in to be continued, your smart im loving the ideas!

  • Chaos said:

    …to keep you on your toes…
    ;D
    if you guys want some early spoilers check the “to be continued” link … you’d be amazed…

  • Sothe said:

    Chaos is right, i love to know what chapters my character will turn up in :)

  • Tenkage said:

    Wow, these are getting really awesome. Makes me wish I was in them but you guys said you’re all most done with all the chapters… ohs wells.

  • white shinobi (author) said:

    there are still some places left so you can still join and if we have too much characters then i’ll make some ch more

  • Tenkage said:

    Sa-weet!!

  • Shadow Ninja said:

    that a nice avatar WS, i love it. “a mission without sensei” it should be “a mission without genin”, ahahaha. just playin. Nice avatar too, firelordsokka.^_^

  • tailedfox said:

    Nice stuff boiz, Keep it up.
    Yea i like WS avatar as well xD

  • ssj sasuke said:

    Not bad. Gotta admit it reminds me a lot of this other manga I like… ku ku ku

  • FirelordSokka said:

    Thanks SN!

  • DarkLurker_4thLegacy said:

    i dont mean to be all spoiled and what not but whens my team gonna appear??I wanna kick a**s too.

  • white shinobi (author) said:

    SN why mission whitout gennin we made it because “me” their sensei isn’t there for the mission

    DL no spoilers but ch 10 is your debut or maybe ch 7

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