Prologue: The Origins of Ikamuzu Oturan
Post Author: I.O.
[3 girls are talking to their older brother. Ikamuzu watches from the room with the door open only enough for him to see them]
Jen: Xaoi, it’s not his fault.
Xaoi: No Jen!! Stop sticking up for Him!!! All 3 of you just STOP!!!!! You all know what he did!!! How can you deny it??
Lai: He was Just 2. How would he have meant to do any of it?
Naria: Lai is right, Xaoi. What’s done is done. We have only each other now. We cannot fall apart over something that happened 7 yrs ago.
[Xaoi begins to tear up]
Xaoi: My Dear sisters I am sorry. I am sorry that I can’t be apart of this lie we call happiness.
[Ikamuzu begins to cry from the room]
Ikamuzu: *thinking* ‘what are they talking about? Why is older brother so angry?’
Xaoi: It’s been 7 years. (While sobbing) 7 years since mom and dad died. 7 years since he killed them. He destroyed our family and our village.
[Naria begins to cry. Lai turns away. Jen looks at Xaoi with desperation to stop]
Xaoi: He brought that Tsunami here and ruined our lives forever. Intentional or not, mom and dad are dead. And it’s all Ikamuzu’s fault. He killed mom and dad.
[Ikamuzu goes numb. “me…….me……..no……â€]
Lai: (with tears in her eyes) ENOUGH!!!!!!!! He was 2 yrs old you jerk!!!! I refuse to hear you put all the blame on him. He, along with the rest of us, is the last of the Oturan Clan. He…….
Xaoi: He is not my brother.
Jen: you……you don’t mean that. How could you possibly mean……
Xaoi: He is not my brother. Ikamuzu is not part of the Oturan Clan. I will kill him. He is still a runt, so to be fair, I will give him to the age of 20 before I end this once and for all. I will avenge my mother and father!
Naria: HOW???? By killing their youngest son?? I’ve heard a lot of dumb shit in my days, but this one takes the cake!!!!! (She gets into fighting stance) As your sister, I will not allow you to tear what’s left of this family apart.
Xaoi: If any of you get in my way, I will have no choice. He will die by hands. For now, I will leave him be…………..for now. He has 11 years. By then my connection to him and this family will no longer exist. That was my goal will be easily met.
Jen: NO!!!! *hand signs* Gushin No Jutsu: Ice Needles!!!
[Xaoi is hit, but it was only a water clone]
Jen: DAMMIT!!!!!!!! That asshole was never here???
Naria: He planned this from the start.
Lai: He……he is really serious.
Naria: *through tears* of…..of course not…….
Jen: Are you seriously saying that? He is gone nuts!!! But if he even dares touches my little brother, I will……………..
[Ikamuzu opens the door. His eyes were blood-shot red, tears streaming down his face, and yet no sound. All 3 girls look at him]
Naria: Ikamuzu.
Ikamuzu: is it true older sister?
Lai: Muzu, its not……….
Ikamuzu: (pleading) ple……..please tell me………
[Naria begins to weep while Lai walks out of the room]
Ikamuzu: Jen? Did I really……….did I really………..
[Jen begins to cry to the point that she cannot speak]
Ikamuzu: I did. I killed mom and dad……………..NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Waves begin to build. They begin to hit the house]
Lai: NARIA!!!!!!! The waves are building, Calm him down.
[Naria is in shock. She cannot move]
Jen: MUZU!!!!!!!! *hand signs* Gushin No Jutsu: Ice Hammer!
[In panic, she knocks Ikamuzu unconscious. He drops to the ground. The waves begin to calm again. Several hours later, Ikamuzu wakes up. He cannot say anything, but hears Naria speaking to someone]
Naria: I’m sorry to bother you so late into the night. I just had no one to go to.
Man: it is okay. I would do anything for my sister’s kids. I was just so shocked to hear from you after so long. The last time I’ve heard from anyone was after the funeral.
Naria: Well, as Hokage, I’m pretty sure you are the only one my mom confounded with about Ikamuzu.
Man: Yes. She told me about him when he was born. She knew that since I was in a different village, I wouldn’t try anything.
Naria: well as you know, with his abilities, Kirigakure is not the best choice of a home for him. Unc……. I mean, Bob-Kage, I need you to take him with you. With Xaoi now after him, you are the last person he would think to go after.
Bob-Kage: Yes, I see what you mean.
Naria: Besides, Shannaro would be the best place for him right now. There isn’t that much water around the land. He would be safe.
Bob-Kage: Agreed. I will take him away with me.
[*Alarm goes off* 10 years later. Ikamuzu (now known as I.O. to protect his identity) is 19 yrs. He wakes up]
I.O.: Not again………………
I.O. Narrator: Same dream, for 10 years. I can’t seem to forget it. 10 years, and I still can’t forget. Bob-Kage keeps telling me to leave the past where it is, but how do you forget something like that? How can you forget your past and act like none of it ever existed? Truth is, you can never forget. My older sister Naria banished me from ever coming to Kirigakure, and Bob-Kage never lets me go anyways. Even as a Jounnin, Kirigakure Missions are not available to me. But things are about to change dramatically, and so I will allow you to be apart of my journey. My name is Ikamuzu Oturan, and this is my story.
2nd! Pwn’d!
I.O.
woot woot!!
::small chanting::
Leads to ::BIG CHANTING::
CHEERS!
Let’s see where this blog takes us!
Hmm… interesting…. lol, I have an Uncle Bob…
WOOOO! I like this story very much. it had a lot of action in it, that what won me over in my thought of this story^_^ man Ikamuzu has some kind of sick power, seems to me its water since they said in the story that he lives away from water now, so he can be safe, i love it. he must be like naruto but he cant control his power at all(water demon). Also i hate to say this but Xaoi is going to beat Ikamuzu ASS!! I mean he is going to beat him into a bloody mess, this guy gots anger problems a lot, he is crazy, but great post who ever wrote this??
what is this the prolog to? It was good anyways! GJ
this story has potensial. can’t wait the next part. I caan’t wait till I confronts xaoi. that is going to be a sick battle
hmm.Nice i.o.Seems interesting!
We will wait to see the next parts.
A fight with Xaoi ..??Maybe
wow y.o i didnt know u could make a post like this it pwns
It’s a nice break from Naruto.It’s SHANNARISH.Good stuff.
Ikamuzu Oturan A.K.A I.O nice blog. It got a Final Fantasy X(One of the best RPG games ever) feel to it. Keep it comin can’t wait to see what unfolds for young I.O.
nice a prelude to wat seems tliek ti will be a real grand story can’t wait to see how this develops gj dude.
I agree with Iruka I think that this story has lots of potential and I cant wait to see what happens with it. You can go into a whole aray of different story plots and I deas with characters that you make up yourself. Whoever made this post I want to say that its a great post and that if your looking for a partner to write it with then I’m your guy. (i also have my own post in progress but think this has too much potential to pass up) Loved it dude keep up the good work.
Yea nice bro. Keep it up
I suppose this is going to be a series ?
…or….not ?
Oi, where be me manners… good job, laddie…
… the drama of it be… uh …. good ?
nice blog ikamuzu oturan GJ
Woow. This is really great story. I wonder what kind of powers have Ikamuzu. Nice job I.O. Can’t wait to see next part!
Ooo! I love the story! At first I thought it was another Sasuke sob story, but it’s different.
You got me hooked! ^-^ More plox!
missing-nin I.O has returned to the village alert Bob-sama and call of the Anbu tracker nin! welcome back dude been far to long!
This is cool ! keep it up! i love the story!
this is kool
hey this is a really good job man. This blog is quite deep. The story is actually quite interesting still so im expecting more
by the way sorry dude. Really and truly this is a great blog i apologise for not saying this b4 really. I still want more though Good job I.O.
OH YH U HAVENT BEEN SEEN 4 A WHILE MISSNG-NIN U ARE WELCOME BACK, HOWEVER DINT THINK WE WILL GO EASY ON YOU LOOOOL.
hahahahaha…………. i hope you dont. Truely, the only way I can get good again is if you tell me the truth. so just cause i’m coming back doesnt mean i’m looking for the GOOD JOBS and NICE BLOGS!! plz, if you hate it, tell me. There is PLENTY of room for improvement.
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