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SHANNARO!!! MANGA CHAPTER 4: “The Temple”

17 June 2008 46 Comments

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Post Author(s): white shinobi & chaos
Graphics and Edit by Guruku
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As the sun rises … the teams find their way to the Shannaro Temple…

White Shinobi: The Shannaro Temple should not be far now… Stan: (FX: yaaawn) …its 6 am … why can’t we go a little later?
Sothe: FirelordSokka was heading to the Shannaro Temple, last time… he might not be far off now… I can sense it…
Sephiroth: Sense what?
Sothe:Bloodshed

White Shinobi: Well, we’re here…
Chaos: Something is not right… silence… too much silence…
FirelordSokka: *on the roof of the temple* Well, now that I’m here, silence won’t be a issue… it’s been a long time… Chaos!
Chaos: …too long…
FirelordSokka: Oh…? Then I will make your wait worth it… I know you like battles as much as I do…..i know your passion for War….it’s in your blood…it’s a bond of war… Do you remember the Civil War? ::Laughs cinically:: Hahaha… How old were we?
Chaos: Too young for war…
FirelordSokka: 14 years old, Chaos… we barely passed The Chunin Exams… we were inexperienced……but i know you loved every single moment of it…..of the senseless slaughter… you and i slaughtered so many people… I can’t even count that much…
Chaos: Times change and people change. I am not who you think I am. What I did and how many I’ve killed; it is irrelevant, I only did that out of orders.
FirelordSokka: You are a bad liar…
Chaos: *Glares at FirelordSokka* I don’t lie…
FirelordSokka: Oh well… What about you Sephiroth? … you were also part of the War… you…
Sephiroth: I won’t lie… war is in my blood also but i have greater goals. War is irrelevant to me, such a lowly being like you only deserves death!
Chaos: That’s an artistic way to put it.
FirelordSokka: I made an offer to you two… you won’t accept the bonds of war… then … Die! YOU WILL ALL DIE!!!!
Chaos: Death… who are you to speak of my death?

::Everyone Jumps up in Fight Stance::

FirelordSokka: GOFUUUN BUNSHIN NO JUTSU!!!
Sephiroth: Bunshin? What a waste of my time…
White Shinobi: Don’t underestimate attacks… it will only lead to death… remember when we barely escaped last time… Over Confidence will be the death of you…
ZepWolfX: …over confidence is overrated … but the clones are way too many… even for an army
White Shinobi: No time to talk….attack… attack … Kage Bunshin no jutsu!

::White Shinobi’s clones attack the numerous Gofuuun Clones::
“Shuriken Bunshin!!!” (Shuriken Replication) ::The thousands of shurikens darken the sky. The sun is barely recognizable from ground level::

White Shinobi: CHAOS!!!
Chaos: Right… DOTON DORYUU TAIGA!! ( Earth Release : Moving Land River)……*this easily kills the remaining Gofuun Bunshin’s*
FirelordSokka: …i didn’t expect my clones to be so weak… but it is futile… for I will have my Revenge!!!

::FirelordSokka makes some hand seals:: “Gofuuunton Gofuuunryuudan!” (5 element release: 5 element dragon blast)

Sephiroth: This is too repetitive… don’t you have better attacks?
FirelordSokka: I am always keeping my best attacks for the Grand Finale…

::The Dragon attempts to hit White Shinobi::

White Shinobi: Damn … it seems your attacks are faster than mine … i have no choice … GOFUUUNGAN ACTIVATE!!! (Gofuungan = 5 element eye … a common, yet the most destructive Kekkai Genkkai… all Shannaro villagers have the power to awaken the Gofuuungan …. but only the elite manage to)
Chaos: I don’t know what you are thinking… I’m not going to activate my Gofuuungan … for such a petty fight.
FirelordSokka: Petty Fight?
Grand_Hokage: Gofuuungan?
White Shinobi: This is it for you, FirelordSokka… my ultimate attack… GOFUUUNGAN DAIBAKURE (Gofuungan : Elemental Explosion) (FX: BOOOM!!!)

*FirelordSokka got hit and now badly injured*
FirelordSokka: Heh, is that all? Fine…*does hand seals*… *but before he finishes*…
Chaos: DakenTaijutsu!!!
::The hit combo throws FirelordSokka to the ground::
Sothe: Suirou no jutsu!!! ( Water Prison Technique) …
*this traps FirelordSokka…but FirelordSokka uses his Space/Time jutsu and vanishes*

Sephiroth: NOOOO!!! YOU WILL NOT RUN AGAIN!!!! and tries to catch FirelordSokka …but he is already gone.
Sothe: Damn it… he ran away again…
Grand_Hokage : *looks stunned* … what jutsu’s…this was more than a Jounin battle… this is way over my abilities… i can barely control one element…
White Shinobi: You will fight like this, one day… someday
Iruka: Yes… but…
Chaos: Let’s go back to the Village… FirelordSokka is no longer here… the mission is over … let’s go.

::Evening, Shannaro Medical Center, KakashiDaSixKage’s Room::

KakashiDaSixKage: How did the mission go, guys?
Sothe: Not so well, FirelordSokka has escaped, yet again.
Silver_Uchiha: I’m still wondering how you found us yesterday… KakashiDaSixKage- sensei…
KakashiDaSixKage: Chaos and White Shinobi sent me in a recon mission, since that was my surveillance area… to get you… little did i know of what was about to happen…
Iruka: You were lucky that Sothe-sensei and Sephiroth-sensei showed up… or FirelordSokka would’ve killed us
Sephiroth: If he wanted to kill you, he would’ve done it already…
Chaos: True… I wonder why did he actually come back after all these years… I doubt Genkage-sama’s fortune (as in wealth) has anything to do with it…
::A nurse walks in::
Nurse: Allright, It is time to go, visiting hours are over, and KakashiDaSixKage must rest…

*Meanwhile, near the borders of the Shadow Country….FirelordSokka is talking to someone unknown….someone that has the same headband as FirelordSokka’s… with the same unknown symbol… it seems they are arguing…*

FirelordSokka: It is your fault… you sent me there.
Unknown Ninja: My fault? … it was you who was defeated… you said you can manage it…whatever the circumstances
FirelordSokka: You know I can’t move when i use that jutsu… it is the negative part of my jutsu!
Unknown Ninja: The Jutsu still failed.
FirelordSokka: It didn’t … I escaped from the Suirou… and used it to teleport myself here… I’m lucky to be alive… I wasn’t expecting such opponents.
Unknown Ninja: The Organization will not be pleased with your progress.
FirelordSokka: The jutsu requires time… I mustn’t be interrupted while doing my hand seals… and you know very well it’s not my fault… the jutsu, if interrupted teleports me in another location.
Unknown Ninja: I will have to report this to the Leader…you know what happens when you fail such a mission, right?
FirelordSokka: You send the Assassins after me?
Unknown Ninja: ……For you? No… The leader himself will have this pleasure…… you will die by his hand…
FirelordSokka: ……I will not fail next time.
Unknown Ninja: Make sure you don’t… for it will be your last mistake…

*Back In Shannaro Village…*

Grand_Hokage: When are you going to train us, Sensei?
Iruka: Yes, when? We’ve been witnessing such powerful jutsu’s lately… if we don’t train… how will we ever reach their level
Silver_Uchiha: You have to train us, sensei!
White Shinobi: I think it is time to teach you some new jutsu’s… The Chunin Exams are approaching… i will not let you fail

From Dawn to Midnight, Team 1’s determination for training pays off… they finally are on the right track… next time they will have to be prepared for for their enemies…

46 Comments »

  • SEPHIROTH13 said:

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  • SEPHIROTH13 said:

    Great job guy.You are amazing!hmm that lil brat always runs .I will catch him next time.Yes war is in my blood.I’m vicious and evil and…ok that’s enough.Can’t wait for the next chapters.

    And now if you come to the think of it…KakashiDaSixKage you should thank me and Sothe.Yes you should.Yes precious.

  • guruku said:

    yay! Top 5! Sweet!

  • WhiteFangofkonaha said:

    gj omg this getting so sweet

  • Naruto Uzumaki said:

    5th oh yeah

  • DarkLurker_4thLegacy said:

    damn just missed top 5 oh welll

  • DarkLurker_4thLegacy said:

    nice its developing quite nicely loving it as it goes keep up the good work guys.

  • DarkLurker_4thLegacy said:

    oh i forgot i love the kick ass jutsus you guys think up really good and imaginative.

  • Naruto Uzumaki said:

    oh and u said tht sn and i wood be in this one and i dont see my name in here >_<

  • Naruto Uzumaki said:

    but its a good chapter. Kepp up the good wurk guys

  • Chaos said:

    uh 7th ?
    ….i don’t recall telling you will be in this chapter, maybe White Shinobi did…

    ….Be Not Afraid Thar, ye searovers …. i be telling ye … ye’ll be in some of me and WS’ upcoming chapters …

    …. and just to let everybody know …. everybody will have a nice piece of action …. EVERYBODY :D !

    …..AYE!!! … now where’s me rum!?

  • Chaos said:

    BTW …. thank ye Guruku for the graphics :D

    … and thanks everybody for the encouraging words …. we WILL live to your expectations….

    ….hope you like the manga :mrgreen:

  • Iruka said:

    The plot thickens. nice work. Sweet I get to learn some jutsu’s!

  • DarkLurker_4thLegacy said:

    oi why does iruka get to learn jutsus and where is my team i know there are no minor characters in the village so whats up!

  • sharingan leader said:

    ya!!!! that was a nice chapter man!!!! i like all of yur guys work, he im wondering, can i be in the nxt one!?!?!?!

  • Chaos said:

    ye will all be in it…. Sharingan Leader noted …. ye’ll be a main villain
    …DL …. just wait man…. Rome wasn’t built in a day …don’t worry ….i ain’t fogetting nobody

  • sharingan leader said:

    yay!!!!!thank you so much!!!!!!!!!! but once again nice blog, it has a nice story to it!!!!!! :D

  • Grand_Hokage said:

    Yo wicked fight man. Cool blog as ususal White Shinobi and Chaos im looking forward to seeing more hopefully from the both of you. Well i know my part will be big soon thats why im mostly being patient, which i thnk is the best thing to do

  • DarkLurker_4thLegacy said:

    the suspense is maddening AAAAAARRRRRRGGGG!

  • Shadow Ninja said:

    breat job lol, i loved it…….it was very pleasing. i sure do hope that you make another for these kinds of storys are not to be ended^_^ i’m sorry but the rest of lol are going to have a tough time trying to surpass these guys. lol will certainly have to step your “a” game now. i mean lol are very good but not as good as these guys, tough compertition huh.^_^ Great job. BTW……. i wonder who is this unknown ninja and who is this so called leader of this organization hmmm. But all in do time.

  • Shadow Ninja said:

    oh so will SL be the the leader thats in the story, why not me and NU be SL humble servents!?!?!? BTW……..Guruku that a nice jobe you did with the pics, your a pro at that^_^

  • FirelordSokka said:

    “he who runs away, lives to fight another day” …

    We have some awesome jutsus and battles going on here. Kishi would be proud! AWESOME JOB! Two enthusiastic THUMBS UP!

    I better get my mission accomplished. I’d hate to see how strong the leader person is! Time to run away again … lol

    Oh hey, can anyone draw? is anyone willing to make an actual manga? Just wondering …

  • ZepWolfX said:

    Yay, I had one line.lol. well done, keep it up.

  • DarkLurker_4thLegacy said:

    I would but i cant draw too much, but i’d definatly have a manga.

  • Sand Swordsmen said:

    Great Job you guys.
    Man I hope we find out who the leader is and whos that person firelordsokka was talking to. Man thats an awesome occular jutsu.
    Also does anyone think that they can make a good naruto for this cross over manga I want to make. Please tell me.

  • Sand Swordsmen said:

    oh and fourteenth! ha ha

  • KakashiDaSixKage said:

    white shinobi & chaos ya’ll out did yourselfs once again. Awesome battle and the suspense level is crazy. Can’t wait for the next chapter. Keep it up and keep it comin LOL

  • Shadow Ninja said:

    yes, it is very mysterious, and unique. it will only get better for there is more mysterious ppl that await, strange ppl, very amuseing^_^

  • Chaos said:

    :D DYNAMIC ENTRY!!! :D

    “”"Oh hey, can anyone draw? is anyone willing to make an actual manga? Just wondering … “”"

    i could draw …. but i be lazy …. LAZY!!!
    ….and my photoshop skills ( y’ know lineart) are quite well “suckish”
    i can draw on paper, but i don’t have a scanner to make my life easier…. FX: SIGH

    so if i get the time and get out of this laziness …i may draw …. only a cover art … and stuff

    But i be lazy …. so yea …

    DYNAMIC EXIT!!!

  • SEPHIROTH13 said:

    Sand Swordsmen cool avatar.

    Hmmm whos is the leader behind that mysterious organization???
    I can’t wait to see the organization members.I hope that they ll be as strong as the Akatsuki members.

  • SEPHIROTH13 said:

    Ohh and Guruku great graphics!(and editing hehe)

  • white shinobi (author) said:

    @ naruto uzumaki i said you guys are in the manga not that you are in this chapter

    @guruku thanks for the editting

    @everyone thanks for the great comments

  • Sand Swordsmen said:

    thanks sepiroth I like yours too. And read my comment on shannaro ness blog and let me hear your ideas.

  • Sand Swordsmen said:

    sorry sepiroth 13 not just sepiroth

  • Grand_Hokage said:

    When is the next manga coming out guys. LOOOOL. yeah that is a nice avatar pic Sand Swordsmen. You got the whole alliteration thing with the S going on there looooool. Also i like your avatar pic DL.

    KRATOS: I AM THE GOD OF WAR, U DARE DEFY ME U PETY TITANS AND FAKE GREEK GODS

  • Sand Swordsmen said:

    grand hokage thanks I think your pick is awesome too. You guys made some awsome blogs I expect some big things from this series. well I better sand surf to another story. S sand away! ha ha

  • Sand Swordsmen said:

    hey how do I change my ranking just wondering since I dont want to be newbie forever.

  • white shinobi (author) said:

    just look at the rank FAQ

  • SEPHIROTH13 said:

    Sand Swordsmen you need to comment a lot and i mean comment not spamming.

  • Sand Swordsmen said:

    By spamming you mean what exactly because I just comment on what I like and I dont know how to send spam. I just want to learn new stuff, enjoy in the conversations, make my own post’s, and enjoy Naruto/related stuff without being snickered at. But really I want to post not spam.

  • white shinobi (author) said:

    spam is to leave short and/or pointless comments to increase your rank

  • SEPHIROTH13 said:

    Congrats for becoming Jounin Elite WS.

  • white shinobi (author) said:

    thanks gratz on becoming anbu veteran seph

  • DarkLurker_4thLegacy said:

    hey I didnt notice congrats Seph Mr. Veteran sir and WS on making elite. Wow the village is getting more and more powerful hey Seph seeing ur a vet now ae you retired from active service……we need to attach another village…….

  • Shadow Ninja said:

    Yeah, congrats WS for makeing jounin elite. Seems like almost everybody is moveing on up. All of the ppl who up their rank with hard work(also me). Give your selfs hand ,bravo-bravo. Woooow!!, i just feel so emotional.^_^

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