Fall of Pein,Rise of the Whirlpool Pt3
Posted by DarkLurker
That which begins must also end!!
The Konoha 7 all are in total shock that the Naruto standing in their midst is a clone.
“How the hell can you be a clone!!!”-Ino,
“Hummm, so that means you have learned everything about it then….right Naruto? The advanced techniques left by your father…right?”-Yamato.
“Yes I have”-Naruto.
“So does that mean your kekkei genkai has activated?”-Yamato,
“You know about that too?”- Naruto.
“What! Father?! Kekkei Genkie?! Naruto?! None of those things fit captain Yamato?!-Sakura
Back in the Rain Village Pein emerges with his original bodies, plus two others, Naruto gasps in horror when he sees his opponent 2 of which he recognizes all to well. Naruto leaps from his hiding his eyes look inhuman. “What have you done to “Tsuande-sama and Jairiya-sama! ANSWER ME YOU FREAK!”- Naruto. “Are you always this loud…boy? Don’t you know that a Shinobi should be in control of all emotion”-Pein. “Listen to me you tattooed “pin-cushion” I will not let you live for this!”-Naruto. “So is it a fight you seek, I know all about you nine-tailed boy and I will have that power within you!”-Pein
Naruto make 5 clones and together they go wild on Pein but are soon beaten. As soon as that first set is beaten Naruto generates even more clones and attacks wildly again but they are again all defeated. “Is that really the only jutsu you know, seems this is not the battle I foresaw after all!” Naruto realizes that each time he attack all 6 of Peins original bodies prove too much for his clones and wonders why he isn’t using the bodies of Tsunade or Jariya did he do this just for a psychological advantage he thinks. Naruto generates 5 other shadow clones and says its time to remove that advantage.
Naruto and Pein are not equal with the number of fighters the battle field resembles a chess board it is Naruto that make the next move and speeds through a set of hand signs “Earth Style: Wall of Graphite” the jutsu surprises Pein “So he did come prepared”-Pein. A giant graphite wall rises from the ground causing a localized earthquake as it comes up the force from the shaking forces all Pein’s bodies to scatter. When the dust has settled the battlefield now looks and arena with each of Naruto’s 3-man clone teams facing down an equal Pein team . “Smart child you separated my bodies but mine aren’t clones”-Pein. “I know”- Naruto
Back in Konoha Iruka and Kakashi are speaking when Kakashi notices a growing thunderstorm in the direction of Konoha 7’s . Iruka suggest that Kakasi send a backup team to which Kakashi refuses as they cannot afford to weaken the countries lines at such a critical time. Back at the Konoha 7 site Naruto’s clone is explaining how things are the way they are now with Naruto “He was left a present from his father and Jariya-sama has been protector of it up to the point where he died”-Clone. It detailed everything about Naruto’s family and had jutsu for him to learn that why he was away for a month.
Naruto’s clone teams are locked in a difficult fight with the Pein’s but each attack that they launch and fails teaches them more about all the Peins’ attack powers. In NCT1 (Naruto clone team 1) the team is down a clone, destroyed during the last failed attack was sucked up along with the attack by the chubby Pein but this loss gave the remaining clones the information the needed. One of the clone observes that all three Peins are always covering each others blind spot and figures if they can get one of them away then they stand a better chance. They both synchronize their movements one performing hand signs for a fire jutsu- “You will have to be quick”-clone1 to clone2. “Fire style: Fire Shuriken Attack” the attack is launched at one of Pein’s bodies as the chubby Pein jumps to absorb the attack the other spots that it is a trap but it is too late as he begins to absorb the blast one of the clones appears behind him and hits him with a “Dense Chakra Rasengan“. As the body falls to the ground the clones double team the others before they can fully realize what has happened. One clone performs a jutsu “Blinding Fire” and causes everyone to cover their eyes for a moment when the light has gone 3 of Pein’s bodies are dead.
The lose of the bodies angers Pein and a jutsu called “Lighting Dragon” the second team Naruto is caught off guard and as he is about to be struck by the dragon and dark clothed figure flashes passed him and counters the lightning attack with “Bladed Wind“. Standing before Pein is a rain ninja. “Explain yourself, who are you to interfere?!”-Pein. “Do you think you have all the information of your opponent!”-Pein. “Who are you ninja!”-Pein. “Naruto Uzamaki”-Naruto. Naruto pulls a strange looking short sword the blade is open down the middle from the tip down near the end of the blade. He tells Pein to prepare himself as the end is near.
To be Continued
So which of the three bodies got killed?
Well i havent really got much to say as i have already read this but DarkLurker all I’ve really got to say is that you’ve done it again your a inspiration to the Rebellion. Plus an inspiration to all of Shannaro Dawg. Man im expecting many great more from you. I’ll probably contribute more later. Superb Job DarkLurker. GH out.
Gj Darkluker sigh* cliffhanger is kishi giving everyone an cliffhanger lessons?
DL you did your thing. I was on the edge of my seat with this fight. Konoha 7 need to get going or they going to miss a hell of a fight. This is the Naruto we wanna see in the manga. If not we alway have the Fall of Pein,Rise of the Whirlpool LOL.
The best part to me is when Naruto some what trick Pein into thinkin he had no moves. When Naruto was just testin him to see what Pein so made of LOL how cocky is it. GO NARUTO!!!
anouther cliffhanger. Dl nice job as always. SO who is going to back up the Konoha 7.
This is the greatest blog I have ever read. Great job and keep it up. Dont take so long to write the next one please.
After reading this post, I realized I made the big mistake of not reading the parts 1 and 2…dammit! Amazing job DarkLurker… it is very refreshing to see Naruto take over and handle business. Not like the actual chapters where Naruto is wack and getting owned by the likes of Sasuke.
DL Congratulations man!Really great blog.Cliffhangers huh?I don’t blame you.Ihave in my own blogs as well.Naruto got smarter too.Nice..Keep up the good work DL.
WOOOOW! that was impressive. this shows that naruto will be a great leader some day he also put up a good fight with pein back there thats my boy,DL. you show can write a large intresting blog man! i just cant shack the feeling of being pleased U RULE DL! everyone clap for DL
two things 1.“Do you think you have all the information of your opponent!â€-Pein…. do you mean Rain Ninja and 2. we need an S-class villan rank (For Me, Chaos, and Sep)
information is the most valuable tool u can have in being a ninja in a life or death situation.you can be the strongest person on earth and have no brain and still lose. knowledge is every thing! DO YOU AGREE!?
ill be it
i want to be something like The fang of death
mart1 plz can i be the villian
Yeah and me and DL need a special rank to. But me and DL aren’t evil, we just look for the best for our rebellion
REBELLION, why not me, i’ll cause mass destruction, caous, let it rain BLOOD! kukukuku rebellion!
sorry, i couldn’t post a comment last night, ‘coz after i got to be 4th, my connection had a few difficult times….but i’m back…..and i gotta say..
GREAT JOB, yet again, DL…. nice narrative speak, man …..
…. i’m waiting for the outcome of this story
this is totally unrelated but….
what’s this rebellion thing
?
…and someone said we should be S-rank
…. kukuku
Yew we should be
hey guys thats so much for the comments i’m glad you liked it it was a bit dicey to write with so many fighters involved but thanks your comments make it worth it.
hehe i love this … but with pics and like more detailed story would make me understand better hehe .. but it good as always
nice blog DL i can’t wait for the next one
yea, when is the next one, will the next one bring shivers down my spine ( in a good way)?
the next is in 6 days unless one of the powers that be push it up a bit.
ok how good this one was, its worth the WAIT! WOW!
Ok then jam Shadow ninja. Dont need to get so excited. DL, dont like calling them powers
its just so good u should be happy, man
you need to chill a little shadownija you don’t want to be like Anaujiram^ (Spammer-Ninja) And GH congrats on jounin elite, because I have been working latley you might catch up to me. Also WhiteFang instead of : Of kohana: it should be : Of Death: and yes you can be a villan if evil enough but for that you should see the Shannaro Authors post.
i am not a spamer! i will not be called ANAUJIRAM! ppl will know my name as, Shadow Ninja the greatest hokage ever on earth when i’m dead! i will stand by that promise i rise to the top and never give up. i will be Great Shadow! this is MY Nindo, my ninja way! remember it!
woa! nice ilike it even more!
DL how many rise of the whirlpools you intent to make?Hope you make 5, 6 or 7.They are really great.
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